Reviews for Messy business this
dead-one chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
fucking awesome. it's really in the grand theft auto spirit. i really liked it. can't wait til the second chapter.
redwater1314 chapter 3 . 3/27/2005
Good story, I hope you're gonna conclude that cliffhanger one day.
Dark Elf5 chapter 3 . 12/9/2002
I like the way this is developing. You've really put some thought into the plot :-) I hope u go on to write more - need to conclude that cliffhanger ;-)
cool chapter 3 . 8/6/2002
cool story
Tosh666 chapter 1 . 7/30/2002
I love GTA 3 and this story captures all the elements of it. An excellent start lets see some more!
Stimpson chapter 1 . 7/27/2002
pretty cool mike :) like the way you've introduced a new character and shown us a new part of the story that isnt seen in the game.

more please. :P
cbaigent chapter 1 . 7/27/2002
Tops dude. I'm waitin for the next chapter.

DO IT!