|Reviews for In the dungeon|
| blindartist416 chapter 1 . 4/8
My only complaint is that it was rather short and didn't go into much detail, other than that, I thought it was good.
| brittany.negronnagorski chapter 1 . 2/17
I loved it :)
| LuanRina chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Stupid Kaname-sama! Dx How could you be so mean to your poor little Zerorin, you cruel bastard! Dx
But yeah, even though I feel bad and sorry for Zero-chan, I can't deny that it was damn HOT! x3 So I think you did a great job writing it, dearest *nods*
Thanks for your hard work! :D
| Carrotz8 chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
One word: perfect.
| SebtasticSmythe chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I really liked this story. You should really continue it.
| Hero Dean Chicken chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
its good but it makes me wonder what happens
| Midnight chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Omg you were fantastic! 0 hoorays for you! :D The meanness was just perfect ;) ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!
| Bite-Me-661 chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
MORE! I NEEDS MORE! X,..,x
| psychobitchlovely chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
omg. please give me a moment to remember how to breath.
wow. that was...just wow.
| 101Amehime-Sama101 chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Lol it a hard job to be the king and even harder to be the king sex slave. Loved your story.
| Lovelylexy12 chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
OH MY GOD I LOVE IT!
Keep up the good work!
| Nessie-san chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
The only thing you forgot was that Zero should be suuuper masochistic in this. It's hotter if he likes the pain, for stuff like this - Otherwise, brilliant job, if OOC, and awesome grammar -
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Ooh I liked it! :):):)
| LadyKatt chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
not to bad except for the typos but you may want to give a warning next time for ones who may not like d/s.
| MissSexyRain chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
xD Kaname is such a asshole in this! Great job if that was case!