Reviews for Bits of chocolate here and there
Jay1331 chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
omg i hate cliffhangers TT love your story comeback please before school starts again for meeeee! DX
blossomingfrost chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
*gasp How could you do this?! Cliffhanger of all things! Haha but it's cool, your story is worth the wait. I like the descriptor writing, but hate it when you describe the sweets because it makes me crave them. Update soon!
UncottonlyCotton chapter 2 . 12/23/2012
I actually liked this one... CONTINUE PLEASE I am dying with excitement *w*
Flames R chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
Ooh... please, please, please! a want the next chapter soon.
It was really sweet, your storytelling ability is amazing and I really enjoyed reading your story.
But if you ask me for advice, you could leave out (just a little) to describe so many details, sometimes you get lost reading (at least in my case) and whatever you do, be sure to update this fic, I love it...
(hmm, sorry if my inglish is like a nonsense babbling, ironically i can't write it very fine)
Kigen Dawn chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
Too cute, it reminds of a picture I saw on deviantart
JukeboxHero333 chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
WHOA! Just... WHOA! O_O I love your attention to detail. Please continue this ASAP! :D I'd really like to read more!
OhMyLeppy chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
Ignore your homework and update!
Linables chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
Well even if you've never written a fanfic before, you MUST be writer! Hardly ever do visitors get the pleasure of reading something so eloquently written. I can't wait to read the next chapter...and I'm SO glad that Jack finally got through to Jamie! ;)
likhitata chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
I love your descriptions! You're amazing at descriptions! I feel so bad for Jack, and I hope that Jamie believes in him again! Can't wait for the next chapter!
pamellka chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
First off, you write so well I forgot you were you. And I forgot you were writing this for me until I saw my name ahahahaha "stubborn kid" is right hehehehehe
Second, asdfjdsjflkjweklrjwglksdhf;ldhfsdjfklajfklsjlkfjsdklfje fwefsd;fj your descriptive skills rock and oh my god why would you do that cliffhanger you old goat
I better get my next chapter soon! :D
reraimu chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
i...okay woah.

i did not anticipate the ending of this, and omg. OMG. im in such suspense right now. you're writing is absolutely superb. just reading it made me in a warm, comfy christmas mood. jalkdfjadsfjsdf

PLEASE UPDATE. holy crap jamie.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
awww... poor jack :(
continue, pretty please?
LC The Brave chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I'd really like to see what comes next. Your writing gives everything a fanciful/cosy feel and I like it. (You managed to make me hungry with the pastry descriptions.)
Ryuuhana chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
O SNAP! It's first day on earth all over again XD Good twist :D
pamellka chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Bitch, what the fuck is this?! Jamie can't see him?! Are you trying to make me mad and hate your guts forever? Piece of shit the next chapter better be good and heartwrenching and stuff. :I

im not kidding, mar.