Reviews for Nip at my Nose
The Warrior Of Twilight chapter 12 . 3/13/2014
I'm just going to say, right now: this story has inspired me to make my own Jackpunzel story.

I mean it, out of all the fanfics I've read on these two: this one is the best. The development, the way you portrayed the characters, the timing, all of it. I cannot tell you how many times I've read this story, and I will continue to do so, regardless if it will finish or not. Take as much time as you need; I am satisfied no matter how you execute it now. I have favorite and followed this story a while back, but I feel I should tell you how much this story means to me. You have made one of the best fanfictions out there, and I will yell out "YES!" in joy if you post the next chapter. I don't think even all the praise this story gets is enough. Take as much time as you need; these kinds of things are brilliant by not being rushed, and creativity, the greatest thing about the mind.

Until then, I will await your next chapter. Or if it never comes, I still love this story either way. Great work, friend!
Chocolate Spirit chapter 12 . 3/6/2014
OMG u should get on ur computer and right now!
WolfieRed23 chapter 10 . 2/17/2014
I already reviewed chapter 12 but here's another one, note this is for chapter 12 not this's been longer than four months! This is worse than Once Upon a Time, I should know, I watch it and they're on hiatus now! I know you're still out there but you are KILLING all of us by not updating! I mean you ended this chapter only to go on a longer than four month hiatus! You lied to us in the above author's note! Come on! This is one of the best Jackunzel stories I've ever read and you won't even update it! Continue soon PLEASE!
LayZkid chapter 12 . 2/5/2014
Ahskdihejka updateeeeeeeeeeeeee..please. T_T
Guest chapter 12 . 1/20/2014
This is a great story! your writing is marvellous and compelling! keep up the great work! Can't wait for your next update
batfan94 chapter 3 . 1/20/2014
Omg it was so sweet and then my jaw hit the floor when she walked through him! T-T YOU ARE TEARING ME APART FANFICTION!
your-dutchess chapter 12 . 1/16/2014
I really love this story and I hope you'll update soon :)
Patpat chapter 12 . 1/2/2014
What could I say ?...
I just started reading your story last week, and I spent each moment of free time I had to reading even some lines of it. I couldn't get my eyes off of it. I just loved it. The way you express Jack's feelings, the dilemma that upset him so deeply, the way Rapunzel discovers real life thanks to his help, how she slowly finds out the fine nuances of love... You really have a gift, and for our great pleasure, you use it perfectly through each chapter.
Special mention for the chapter with Bunnymund :D I enjoyed his over-protective attitude toward Rapunzel. I couldn't expect less from the Guardian of Hope : such a show-off, acting like a bad guy, but always so thoughtful.
I hope you're not stuck into some writer's block, because I'm waiting for the 13th chapter with eager appetite. Though I must admit that, English not being my mother tongue, it's sometimes hard for me to follow your train of thoughts, especially when descriptions are too long, I often get lost into it. But I do my best ! And reading helps me improve my English comprehension :D
Anyway... I'm now one of your followers !

- Patchan
DylanTVillain chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
I know it say I reviewed on chapter one but I finished what you've or so far pear keep posting. Finish what you started, please it just doesn't make sense if you stop because it's like you didn't dedicate yourself to the fanfic. But trust me, I'm in love with your writing it's simply beautiful.
ImagineDragonz7 chapter 12 . 12/30/2013
I loved it! But please post soon. Always finish what you started.
sahararose114 chapter 12 . 12/30/2013
Love this chapter, great job you made everything so sweet in your writing! This couple is so cute together, I cant wait for the next update! )
ashlyntwynyo chapter 12 . 12/29/2013
So cute! Update soon, yeah?
Guest chapter 12 . 12/28/2013
So I was reading the chapter, my battery low and my phone almost dead. I was SOO close to reading the part where they kiss and then BAM! It turns off.
"he hurriedly lifted her cupped cheek, fiercely capturing her lips within-"

I felt like crying because I had to wait until my phone was charged again, me impatiently waiting for it to turn on again.

Anyways, AWESOME chapter. Best one
LMK022013 chapter 12 . 12/28/2013
I don't even know where to start. This is the first time I've ever reviewed, but I just had to say something! I absolutely adore this story, and not just this chapter, but all of them. Your writing is beautiful and inspiring beyond belief. I'm a wannabe writer I guess because the only person who's read my stories is my best friend, but ever since I started reading this story I've been typing like mad. Every week I check for updates just in case I miss one, and I've never been disappointed by your work! I think your interpretation of how Rapunzel and Jack have progressively grown to love one another is perfect. Others might think that the storyline is too slow, but I disagree. Every chapter has purpose and I totally get it. You've captured their personalities dead on and I have to give you props for that. The language that you use in your writing is a little old fashioned I guess people could call it, but I think that it works perfectly with the story and with the characters. During your hiatus, I searched all over for another Jackunzel story to become obsessed with ;). Honestly, I never found one as absorbing and satisfying as yours. Every time I try and read some other Jackunzel fan fic, I find myself unable to finish it because it always lacks that special SOMETHING that keeps me hooked. I have absolutely no problem reading and rereading Nip at My Nose again and again, I love it so much. I hope you never stop writing this because I always look forward to taking a break from life and school to read what you have in store for us loyal readers. Personally, I love the fact that you keep your story free of swearing because honestly I hate it with a burning passion ). It hurts to be reading a perfectly good story and then the author ruins it with swear words. With your writing, I know that I don't have to worry about that and I reeeeeeeeaaaaaally appreciate it. Another beautiful thing about your writing is that even though your storyline has LOTS of flirtatious fluff and hints, you keep Jackunzel's romance clean, but still enticing to read. It's nice to know that a fellow Christian isn't afraid to voice her opinions about Easter and such ). Don't let anyone's nasty comment so you from writing because you have a gift! You seem like a lovely person, and so I wanted to let you know about it! There's nothing I would change about either your writing style or the wonderful creation of a fiction that you've made, but PLEASE keep it coming! I know how hard it is to juggle finals and work and writing all at the same time, so I understand the update gaps right now, but I wanted to tell you how impatient your readers are. Although, I'm sure you know that by now ;). If I could, I would subscribe and favorite this story until my Kindles' battery runs out. Unfortunately I'm stuck in high school with over-protective parents (I'm sure you've met the type), but I will say that I've gotten my friends hooked on this story too, so I'm definitely doing my best to get your writing noticed! PLEASE KEEP THE STORY ALIVE ) and keep it beautiful, though I'm positive you won't have any issues with that!
Your faithful reader,
Guest chapter 12 . 12/25/2013
If you don't update I will die. I'll drown in my own tears
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