|Reviews for The Pass|
| McKay Rulez chapter 1 . 11/20
That was good. Adds a neat twist.
| Wishfull-star chapter 1 . 9/27
that was amazing I loved the story and I have to thank you for writing it:)
| Smithback chapter 1 . 7/17
| LAdolphingirl chapter 1 . 7/13
You read that too? HI!
I love that story, as well as this pair! I agree it's not around enough... So unfortunate.
| IDontKnow chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
| Gali chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
Ok that was unexpected but interestingly i liked it! Heehee good blow to shang's ego for a change heh!
| Concolor44 chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
Didn't see that one coming. Nice angle, though.
| It's MEEEE chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Oooo plez continue. Mulan seems so BA.
| slytherinbiatch chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Very nice story (BTW I ship Shan/mulan ) could you do a story of what happened when she was kidnapped and fell in love? If you don't it's fine, but I just really like this story.
| GenderBender25 chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Oh, so a kinda evil! Mulan then hey?
| deets1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
You're right-there is definitely not enough Shan-Yu/Mulan, and I really want some after re-reading the first chapter of Hachin: Seasons. I have to say that that was about the last thing that I expected, and I like it. It was a creative ending.
Thanks for writing this and for adding to the Shan-Yu/Mulan.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
ohh that is an interesting twist, I liked it :)
| JadeWolf96 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Love the idea of Mulan being married to Shan yu
| Fox Boss chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Nice story, but what about Mushu?