Reviews for The Pass
secretwhovianpony chapter 1 . 8/19
... The hell? I have no idea what to think about this story. None at all. I feel very confused.
Amore1993 chapter 1 . 6/17
Espied7 chapter 1 . 5/8
Hmm, interesting idea.
guest chapter 1 . 3/29
Not bad though I have no idea how on Earth the Huns got a hold of Mulan, considering she doesn't exactly live on the border of China or anything like that but ... oh well. There's also the whole marriage - and presumed sex - at 14 thing but ... considering the time period I might be able to overlook that fact. The big reveal felt a little clumsy and I think I would have preferred this story if it had been written using paragraphs and fleshed out.

Still, it's definitely not BAD - just could be better.
MayhemBunny chapter 1 . 2/25
Oh goodness, I just came across this and I'm really wishing there was a drabble series of Battar and Mulan. Is that weird? So good!
Sans's Wife chapter 1 . 2/3
Continue please
McKay Rulez chapter 1 . 11/20/2015
That was good. Adds a neat twist.
Wishfull-star chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
that was amazing I loved the story and I have to thank you for writing it:)
Smithback chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
pretty good
LAdolphingirl chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
You read that too? HI!

I love that story, as well as this pair! I agree it's not around enough... So unfortunate.
IDontKnow chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Gali chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
Ok that was unexpected but interestingly i liked it! Heehee good blow to shang's ego for a change heh!
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
Didn't see that one coming. Nice angle, though.
It's MEEEE chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Oooo plez continue. Mulan seems so BA.
slytherinbiatch chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
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