Reviews for The Pass
Smithback chapter 1 . 7/17
pretty good
LAdolphingirl chapter 1 . 7/13
You read that too? HI!

I love that story, as well as this pair! I agree it's not around enough... So unfortunate.
IDontKnow chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Gali chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
Ok that was unexpected but interestingly i liked it! Heehee good blow to shang's ego for a change heh!
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
Didn't see that one coming. Nice angle, though.
It's MEEEE chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Oooo plez continue. Mulan seems so BA.
slytherinbiatch chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Very nice story (BTW I ship Shan/mulan ) could you do a story of what happened when she was kidnapped and fell in love? If you don't it's fine, but I just really like this story.
GenderBender25 chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Oh, so a kinda evil! Mulan then hey?
deets1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
You're right-there is definitely not enough Shan-Yu/Mulan, and I really want some after re-reading the first chapter of Hachin: Seasons. I have to say that that was about the last thing that I expected, and I like it. It was a creative ending.

Thanks for writing this and for adding to the Shan-Yu/Mulan.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
ohh that is an interesting twist, I liked it :)
JadeWolf96 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Love the idea of Mulan being married to Shan yu
Fox Boss chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Nice story, but what about Mushu?
LaurelGrace chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
... Wow. I had never even thought of this pairing before.

I guess I am now doomed to always want more, huh?
Sakura Lisel chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
I like it, but you should continue it or do a prequel to show exactly what happened all those years ago when Mulan was kidnapped, what her life was like with the Huns before she met and fell in love with Shan-yu and married him leading to her 'rescue'. HOW and WHY did she get 'rescued' and not simply be mistaken for another Hun girl, since nobody should have an idea of what she looked like as a teenager? Unless her dad was there on the raid and recognized her after being seperated for years (how old WAS she when she was taken from her birth family?)
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