Reviews for Breathe
Misterida chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Oh wow! This was such an interesting insight into what Jeff is going through having two children who are so very sick! I hadnt realised until i read this, just how much i have missed having Jeff's input - on the surface he seems to be holding together so well, but of course he isn't (who would be?!) It finishes sort of a little bit like there might be more - will this be touched on again later in Determined? I hope so, this was really good and I'd like to see more from Jeff! Great one-shot hun! More, more, more! :)
Angel-Sue76 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
aww poor Jeff what a situation to be in. Having one son ill is bad enough but two and then having three others who need his support too just goes beyond all comprehension.

I don't blame him for needing to breathe as most people would. I know my mum has needed that many times when I have been ill.

This is a heart wrenching story but good to see how Jeff is trying to cope with it all.
LexietFive chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Wow,this was gorgeous,emotional and totally breathtaking to read!
Fantastic oneshot.
thunderbird5 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Gees. Makes me remember the days i visited my brother in hospital when we were only 6or7years old. So yeah, i know the feeling. I didn't know that he was in hospital until my father walked into my dorm room that friday and told me that my brother was sick and that he was in hospital that entire week. To make things worse. I had to return to school after the weekend. I couldn't stay with my twin. How horrible.
JoTracy123 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Really enjoyed that honey. Well done glad to read Jeff's feelings with what is going on with John and Virgil nice job xxxx