Reviews for Soulmates
yonkeya chapter 12 . 3/1
Please update as soon as possible I really like this story
Alex chapter 12 . 1/1
Please update soon!
Eth chapter 12 . 12/2/2014
I love this story!
stacy.deitz chapter 10 . 11/23/2014
Hey I love this story. However you should have more of Kakarot and chichi. I assent to know how their relationship progresses through their separation. Bulma and Vegeta are my second favorite after Kakarot/Goku/Chichi. Please make more scenes with them and their relationship. Hey maybe you can make it to where Vegeta, Chichi and 18 get taken by Freeza and Raditz, Kakarot and Bulma have to escape cooler to save their mates. Maybe have those three tortured by freeza and eventually they all turn into super saiyans. That would be so damn awesome. Them 6 against Freeza, cooler and King cold and all their men or creatures that works for the triple evil bastards.
he0ky chapter 2 . 11/7/2014
Hehe hope ppl went for mating season : p
he0ky chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
Such a nice ideea, i am really loving it so far. Yuhu happy i found it
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 12 . 11/4/2014
No problem here. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. :)
Stacy Deitz chapter 12 . 11/4/2014
Hey that's cool. I'm glad you didn't give this story up like many others I have read ad. The people didn't finish. But please add more chichi and Goku/ Kakarot's moments or thought and what not. I like Bulma and Vegeta but I love Goku/Kakarot and chichi. Please write more on them too.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/4/2014
That's ok i know how hard it is when ur computer crashes that's happened to me to but I'll wait i love ur story good luck
Guest chapter 11 . 9/13/2014
needs more 18 and more armored women scenes!
stacy.deitz chapter 11 . 8/23/2014
You should add a little more Goku/Kakarot/Chichi scenes and conversations. I love this big you should make it about both couples since it's tags as both couples. This is a very interesting story and maybe you can do chapters or scenes with Goku and chichi talking through their bond or feeling what the other is feeling or even seeing. Plus maybe you should also focus on what chichi, 18 and Vegeta are going through on planet Vegeta. You should make to where those three get taken by Freiza while Bulma, Kakarot and Raditz are with cooler. That would be very interesting. Please update cause I still love this story just got add more if the others and their issues with what they go through with their mates. Put Vegeta, chichi and 18 in danger and in worse conditions then what Bulma, Raditz and Kakarot are. They they should save the other once they find out about Freiza having them and completely torturing them worse then cooler did to Bulma, Kakarot and chichi. They all should go super saiyan too. Now that would be cool as hell.
LillaQ-Arrow-DBZ-4life chapter 11 . 7/1/2014
This is a really good story. I love the plot and that you make Bulma the main victim of the cold brothers. In a way it makes her more like Vegeta everyday.
Please keep writing.
I also like that you don't make Goku a complete idiot like some of the other fanfics.
xxxPinkCupCakesxxx chapter 11 . 1/24/2014
I want to start off by first telling you that you have a wonderful story going on. For some reason I just don't like Bulma's character at all. I love the fact that she can be a cold blooded killer but I feel like you're focusing more on her than the actual story. I like how you're making the chapters longer but I feel like you could be more descriptive & give other people's perspectives. You tend to jump from scene to scene focusing on just Burma. What's going on in Vegeta-sei? How are Chi-Chi & 18 holding up? Like I said, you have a wonderful story going on but I'm not really feeling any emotion from the story. It's not bad at all, it just seems rushed to me. You really don't go into detail with Goku & Chi-Chi's relationship at all & it seems like 18 is there just because...I don't really know why you have her in the story...to me you make it seems like Bulma & Vegeta are the only good fighters in the story, it really makes the others look very pathetic..but I just wanted to give you a little thought on how I feel about your story, no hard feelings. You are a good writer & I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (:
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 11 . 12/18/2013
oh I hope she beats the shit out of Cooler. I'm assuming that she will be turning into a Super Saiyan when she kills him. I hope so anyway. I can't wait for more updates.
HerosReprise chapter 11 . 12/15/2013
Sorry it's taken me so long to read this one.
I actually had a dream about this story last night, I was Bulma and the Ginyu force arrived for some reason. Aha so random. But I guess that just says a lot about the creativity of this story and that it is getting to me on a subconscious level.
Anyway, this chapter... Loved it!
I kinda think it is good that cooler is beating her, like she says, it's a way for her to get stronger.
I thought that cooler was going to want her sexually, but I like that you went the other way and had him want to extinguish her fire. That makes complete sense to me. Excellent.
Bulmas dreams, sounds like some epic foreshadowing. Omg I really really hope Vegeta doesn't die in this story. I will cry so hard!
It sounded as if, in her dreams she was protecting her kids...
I'd love to see some more R18,GCC, moments eventually. But I do love how Bulma as a character is developing.
Anyway, excellent story, looking forward to the next update!
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