Reviews for A Prime's Promise
CybertronianBeing chapter 1 . 7/20/2019
Thank you for blessing me with this :)
TFP FanGirl chapter 1 . 2/8/2019
Aw. I liked it. And yes, I agree. Though, he was probably a lot focused on SURVIVING the frozen waste land they were currently stiff in, I do agree with you on the fact that Raf should've gotten his snow ball. Aw, cute and fluffy. Thanks for writing that.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2019
heheheheheehe I love Optimus' perfect representation here
CyberNinjaKat chapter 1 . 8/4/2018
Aw! I love it
Snowfun chapter 1 . 1/7/2018
Haha! So cute!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2017
Jbugs chapter 1 . 5/22/2017
They should add that part in the show. Yes, it was a bummer that Optimus didn't give RAF the snowball. But he was worrying about getting to Ratchet before freezing to death. And not being eaten by scrapletes.
LFoodeater chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
Now that you think of it Rafs only father figure to look up to is Optimus
Transformers1110 chapter 1 . 8/30/2016
All I have to say is Ahhhhhh!
Vigilante 18 chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
Yep... That was a nice touch! Good work
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
*snaps fingers* Okay!
LunaHermioneGinny chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
This is so sweet. This is an awesome story. I was wondering what happened to that snowball. :)
Tanzanite-Zircon chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
Aww. This is so cute! Optimus really does act like a father to the children. Reminds me of the relationship between Sonic and Optimus in my fanfic, "Sonic Transformers." I love this short and sweet story.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
Jason Valane chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
Lol so cute.
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