Reviews for One Brisk Day
laurenziz chapter 1 . 8/28/2016
Enjoyed this piece on the backstory of how the pair met. Really sweet and showcases both of their characteristics well.

The characters stayed IC and I enjoyed the fact that you didn’t shy away from the racial slurs in the dialogue as this is just reflecting the prejudices and stereotypes of the times.

Besides a few spelling errors, this piece is an enjoyable read. Thank you.
dreamsinink chapter 1 . 11/20/2015
Thank you! That's sweet...
Guest chapter 4 . 10/10/2015
I loved it, gave us clear perspective on the relationship. I always loved that shipping. Honestly even though Grace had more of a advantage being on the series it was obvious that Kit had feelings for his wife and that it was stronger than what he felt for Grace. When his wife killed Grace, he didn't get mad more upset at the idea really. If Grace had done it I truly believe it would've been a different story. Ultimately it was kit fault that his wife killed Grace because really how would he feel if the roles was switch. Him being so effy in the end brought the destruction of his family.
Hammerin chapter 4 . 8/20/2015
Flawless. Thank you :-)
Hammerin chapter 3 . 8/15/2015
I'm so in love with this, very interesting and realistic. I hope a fourth chapter does come.
Eiri Lain chapter 3 . 12/1/2014
I know you may not update this ever, since it's been a long while... but I want you to know that these 3 chapters were written nicely and I really could see where you were taking this. It was well done and you captured the couple's interaction and their characteristics beautifully. :) Write on!
The Sugarplum Hippie chapter 3 . 11/8/2014
This was really great, I hope you write another chapter because I loved Kit & Alma during AHS. Please update this, it was really fantastic
Broadway Evanescence chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
This is so adorable. I love this pair much better than Grace and Kit so thank you so much for making this!
cornflakesnobowl chapter 3 . 9/14/2014
Do continue!
cornflakesnobowl chapter 2 . 9/14/2014
Oh i really like this. Your Kit and Alma are adorable.
TheEmoVanity chapter 3 . 8/10/2014
Ah, yes, an update. I so need the next chapter already.
thelatenight chapter 2 . 7/29/2014
Ahhh I really like these two one shots! I really like them because they seem really realistic and simple but also fun and well written. I like in the first one how he saves her, that would definitely happen I think because he says that he wants to tell everyone about their relationship so he can protect his family. And think about how fast he runs out of the house with a shot gun when he thinks he hears his own friends/acquaintances outside! I also like how on the night they go to the fair, you mention that this is also when poor whites and hippies come, that reflects the time and racial dynamics well, it also places him there too since he is also a poor white guy.
TheEmoVanity chapter 2 . 6/12/2014
Oh my gosh! This story, I like, I love it! I think I know where you're going with this and can't wait to see the next chapters; PLEASE update soon. This story CANNOT die. Great work :) :p
MaverickPaxAPunch chapter 2 . 5/25/2014
I'm glad you decided to continue this! Ic an see why you'd think that people would be more into Coven now that Asylum is over, but Asylum is my personal favorite. Your writing is superb, keep it up! I can't wait to see this at the too of the update list!
Mrs. Lahote chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
This sure was a nice 1-shot :) I know, I was disappointed with the whole Alma, Grace thang but I definitely love this shot!

Will you be writin more ?
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