Reviews for Awake my Soul, Awake my Tongue
theHuntgoeson chapter 3 . 1/2
So beautiful and poignant, I wish there was more of it. I hope you feel able to write that healing final chapter sometime.
LouBelle04 chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
Love the idea for this :)
Can't wait for more
CalamityElle chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
Eurgh, i hate you and your fab writing and your fab hair. get out...only joking m'lovely, this was wonderful, more soon please (and of ASL) much love xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Lifeinthe80s chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
I loved this chapter, very well written all the way through. It's nice to see things finally getting better for the two of them and I'll look forward to reading the next chapter!

Lifeinthe80s xx
PersiaAmelia chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
Loved this chapter! Shown a different side to them both- I liked that :)
Jazzola chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
N'aww! I love the ending- so gorgeous. Thoroughly awesome writing throughout, and the emotions were superb- love love love it.

Plus, you distracted me from Livejournal not working! *grrr*

Thanks hugely, and I look forward to more. Happy New Year :-D

Katie Duggan's Niece chapter 3 . 1/1/2013
This is well written, and the imagery at the beginning is effective - the use of visuals (colors) and sounds and impressions.

And though this is a healing chapter, the reader is accompanying Alex through her humiliation, her disappointment in herself.

Gene's comments about not being able to stand to see her cry ring true. Is it because he feels helpless or because he sees her as strong? Or needs to see her as strong?

Poor Alex, though! I suspect she needs a nice, long cry, for multiple reasons. Fortunately she's on her way to a bit of calm and nurturing, which she needs, and Gene probably does too.
Snapecharmer1 chapter 3 . 1/1/2013
Ah, much happier already. Can't wait for the last chapter!
theoofoof chapter 3 . 1/1/2013
Great chapter; glad to see things are improving for them. Can't wait for the last chapter.
Snapecharmer1 chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Glad to see them in a realistic situation, and the tenderness Gene displays is so unbearable sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter.
GeneHuntress chapter 2 . 12/24/2012
Heartbreaking - but brilliant. More very soon, I hope?

And have a great Christmas yourself! xx
Katie Duggan's Niece chapter 2 . 12/23/2012
As much as I hate seeing Alex this way, I admire your writing, especially your characterization of Gene. That he would be choose not to take advantage of the situation, that he would pity her, that he would care for her, matter-of-factly and tenderly, is in character.

And poor Alex! She's not going to have the best night, or morning, and is bound to hate herself.

The references to Luigi were welcome too. I hated the way he was unceremoniously ushered from the series in the second-to-last episode.

Now on a completely different subject, the rather romantic Christmas Eve snow, is there any significance, beyond creating a mood?

I'm looking forward to see how your resolve this.
theoofoof chapter 2 . 12/23/2012
Aww, this was lovely, if a little depressing. The way Gene is with Alex in this is beautiful. Can't wait for more.
saturninely chapter 2 . 12/23/2012
This seems rather miserable for a Christmas fic, but that's fine! I'm guessing things are going to start looking up in the next couple of chapters, and the current melancholy atmosphere of the story is more fitting for my current mood in any case, haha. You have such a beautiful writing style - your characterisation is fantastic, and you convey emotion so well. I envy your talent!
Jazzola chapter 2 . 12/23/2012
Again, the emotion... it's so poignant, and the characters really do come to life, as well as staying *in* character. I am thoroughly enjoying this, and may your own Christmas be a bit happier than these chapters :D

Jazzola #:) (tinsel hat face!)
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