Reviews for What if?
KPH chapter 1 . 4/10
This ending is MUCH better! I hope you can continue soon.
alea holmes chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
I always found how bad Mary was treated in the TV Show. It's really a good idea to let Adam Jr live.
When will you update? I'd like read your next chapters.
BaronessvonTrapp chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
I'm glad you wrote this. I hate the fact that the baby died. I mean Mary had enough grief prior to that episode. It's very good so far. I'm interested to see what happens in this version. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Tauna Petit-Strawn chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
If everyone's safe, I'd like to know why Mary's crying.
CocoRocks chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Oh my gosh I love this. I always wished this was what happened in the show. Are you gonna include Albert's guilt of smoking the pipe.
autumnrose2010 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I'm really glad that Alice and the baby lived...
cookieprincess6 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I love this story! I will keep reading it for sure!