|Reviews for What if?|
| KPH chapter 1 . 4/10
This ending is MUCH better! I hope you can continue soon.
| alea holmes chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
I always found how bad Mary was treated in the TV Show. It's really a good idea to let Adam Jr live.
When will you update? I'd like read your next chapters.
| BaronessvonTrapp chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
I'm glad you wrote this. I hate the fact that the baby died. I mean Mary had enough grief prior to that episode. It's very good so far. I'm interested to see what happens in this version. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Tauna Petit-Strawn chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
If everyone's safe, I'd like to know why Mary's crying.
| CocoRocks chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Oh my gosh I love this. I always wished this was what happened in the show. Are you gonna include Albert's guilt of smoking the pipe.
| autumnrose2010 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I'm really glad that Alice and the baby lived...
| cookieprincess6 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I love this story! I will keep reading it for sure!