|Reviews for Pitch's Game|
| Edward0Elric chapter 4 . 8h ago
| n0T3Z k1LLz 3v3RYtH1Ng chapter 4 . 1/27
Oh gog this was amazing! :D the staff thing and then are you going to let me go now? "..hmph.." ".." Amazing! Love this!
| Avelona-and-Sally chapter 4 . 1/25
THIS IS THE BEST THING. THE BEST. THING.
The fluff! And the funny! And the Pitch! And the Jack! Why so cute?! Why so amazizzing?! Sjsbsodjaiwgwnsibs!1!eleven!
I wanna say something intelligent and critique-y but I can't FIND anything to criticize. Aahvejdbxisbajsb! This is beautiful! Aasfbsjdnsksjsbvjsqpdieyg!
| ChucklingDevil chapter 4 . 1/14
This is amazing.
While this is certainly a humorous story it's also serious and covers some very interesting details and perspectives.
I love the way you've written all of them, every single portrayal that you've done of each character has been just wonderful to read.
And I just have to mention the hug and Jack's calculated attempts in trying to engage in said hug. It was beautiful.
I am most definitely looking forward to seeing your next update, I really want to see how you plan to continue this and how Pitch and Jack can start their romantic relationship.
| hopeistheway chapter 4 . 12/12/2013
I love this story. It keeps Pitch in character yet shows his lonely side perfectly. Also, the entore story is just a huge pule of creativity. The humor is wonderful. I love this idea, it's original and hilarious. Also, I ADORED the hug at the end of the chapter! I was cracking up as Jack circled Pitch, and then wouldn't let go for a half hour. That was brilliant. I'm excited for whenever the next chapter comes out. I'm really interested in seeing how this plays out.
Eagerly waiting, hopeistheway
| sparkalie chapter 4 . 12/11/2013
Jack is so cute, trying to figure out how to hug Pitch. I just wanna grab them and smother them with affection!
| Lexy chapter 4 . 9/26/2013
OMG I love this. It's so funny and nice. I can't wait for the next chapter :D
| Sora Tayuya chapter 4 . 9/14/2013
I anticipate your next chapter.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 3 . 9/14/2013
What you did with the scene was brilliant. The lead up to Pitch, the scene with Pitch, everything was brilliant. The first scene depicting the altered time together with North (much better than the movie)..lovely. Just wonderful.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
I am now enjoying this presumably harmless game, which Pitch has obviously devised to prevent Jack from actually joining the other side in advance. What a delightful plot.
| Joisjoisj chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
| Doubled-Helix chapter 4 . 7/24/2013
Ha! This is hilarious! Aesthetic philosophy- PURE GENIUS!
| LaurenJr chapter 4 . 7/22/2013
AHA I loved the elves POV ofmit all! YOU ARE A GENIUS! KEEP IT UP! But I need to remember to read this when I'm alone because its very hard to muffle my really loud laughter from this- you my dear author ar - TALENTED!
Read ya later,
| JinxNightshade chapter 4 . 6/22/2013
Oh, this is adorable I loved that last scene! Please, oh please tell me you'll continue!
| Aeternum Spe chapter 4 . 6/14/2013
I love this story. I can't even explain in words how much I love this story. Pitch and Jack are super adorable, and it's made me laugh out loud a few times. I may or may not have scared my classmates in the process. I'm not really a fan of humor genres, I enjoy serious stories more often than not, but this is definitely an exception. I will say it again, I love this story. I hope writer's block doesn't catch you, you don't know how sad I was when I saw it only had 4 chapters. Update soon please, the story is amazing so far, the hug part by far my favorite. And just in case you didn't know, I love this story.