Reviews for Breathing Him In
skyviolet15 chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
really really good one shoot...
please make another zona one shoot againnn
El3v3n chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
At first I really thought this was an awkward situation for these two to be placed in - the whole naked for body heat (The giving her air made the fangirl in me erupt with untameable glee) but this turned out very nice! New to ZoNa and glad to have found this!
nigahiga chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
teehee
Don Kanouji chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
Waaaahh... you just...! AaaHh! Every singel time! Nail the personalities! REALLY enjoyed reading this one specially though... might be because of the rather calmed nami... Not that i dislike her rampaging moments! Cute storyline... i want to see more of this cute side of nami... as always u suceed to keeps my hopes up of ZoNa alivee! Much love!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Ya can't just put it in! Like a lil foreplay man would have been awsome, the mood was iight but then it turned into this goes here. Man that tottaly sucked otherwise you have a good narative voice and grasp on emotions. but GAAHHHH! YA can't just put it in!
Anonymous Being chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
You know after reading this wonderful little story without even paying attention to the author name, I was pleasantly surprised to find that the talented author was a friend and fan of my own work. I loved the idea of him breathing air into her and how it all unfolded. Very well done. :) It's rare to find a good ZoNa oneshot that isn't completely porn star but you definitely found a good balance. Great job, keep it up!

- B.
nikki chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
The story was good ] I really enjoyed it. Just a few minor things that some proof reading will help with. You missed a few words like "to" or "the" ( I do that all the time though lol) but like I said great story line ]
megazawa chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
The sharing air under water is pretty classic and you totally use it well. It was cruel to force the two awkwardly hold on to each other, butt naked. And I just f*ing love that! XD Great one shot, bro!
Prinnywaifu chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
I applaud you for this great fanfic. It's very well written and I really like how you portray Zoro (I find it very hard to stay in character with him). The only thing that slightly bugged me was the use of 'Mikan-head' to refer to Nami, but that's just personal preference I guess. I found a link to this fic in Tumblr and the title is very nice and it met my expectancies. So once again: good job. c;
ul-him chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Oh dear I love this, gotta try out that way of keeping warm ;), but the scene underwater was my favorite I really love the ways Zoro takes decisive decisions.
Trunksmybaby chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
loved it
navitor3 chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Shiiiiiiit. Omg, you've got me cursing now, even if it is mild! Zoro and Nami naked by the fire, doing what comes naturally, lol. I'm still feeling it!

Nami's 'mind summoning' was hilarious and once again I'm loving your Sanji! How do you make him a nagging whiney and still make him attractive? Lol, or is it just me seeing him that way!

The kiss of life under the water was something I so wish I could seeeeee. I really think you should find an artist to draw it! Seriously! :)

Beautiful one-shot!

Ps. Not vulgar at all ;)
mochidesu chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
That was a fantastic one-shot! And the best part about your stories is that they’re always super long xD (plenty for me to read, lol) Loved when they each confessed something to each other. Plus, the ending… let’s just say it was beyond awesome :)
KimuraMinami chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Yay, LeMon! Oh No, the lemon is too short...(I can say that since you already know I'm a perv)

All in all, I think you did a great job, the story's got whole package. And you were right, you've given them a context that they have no other choice but to have sex, miahahahaha!

Now, who's that zombie story writer who's also a ZN writer? I think I kinda have an idea...humm...
Q chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Great story
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