|Reviews for Black Widow|
| Chinagirl18 chapter 7 . 1/5/2013
That Cora...so incredibly manipulative. A bit the Cora on Once Upon A Time. Ever seen it? Also, just a random curiosity question: how did you come up with the name "Cora Sinclair"? Seems very specific, and the "sin" part matches perfectly. Update soon! :D
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/4/2013
I'm liking this :)
mostly an Artie/Vanessa shipper but I am really liking this. poor ol' Artie bear.
| hilobrah chapter 6 . 1/3/2013
This chapter makes me want to scream at Artie since he is already falling for her. Can't she accidentally fall down some stairs. She's evil. Did I mention I hate Cora?
| KJay99 chapter 6 . 1/1/2013
I like the way that you show how Artie is falling under her influence. The thoughts make sense- yet are twisted. :) Nice.
And- it appears like there is another side to this Cora. Wonder what he end game is?
| hilobrah chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
You are a good writer. I hate Cora! Why can't Artie see through her manipulation? I wish she'd choke on one of Leena's cookies! All that said when is the next chapter coming out?
| KJay99 chapter 5 . 12/27/2012
Heh. Nice chapter. Action packed!
A few errors that I'll point out later.
Yay for chapter releases!
And Eep! She- us that- you- seem to have something about her- you thing...
| snoble24 chapter 5 . 12/27/2012
is this the last chapter? i love this story and i want to be sure if this is the last chapter. if not how many more you think of doing
| Aorta Heartless chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
This is awesome.
| snoble24 chapter 4 . 12/23/2012
great story so far. i really love it. i hope you get the next chapter up quickly. i want to see how this story goes and how it all works out. i hope none of the charecters from the show are killed.
| steampunk-archer chapter 4 . 12/22/2012
Is old Artie bear going to be in trouble? *gasp* not Artie... I gotta know what happens.
| KJay99 chapter 4 . 12/22/2012
Heh. I like this chapter. Very interesting. But what is that paragraph where it seems to jump to Artie's pov- then back to the retirement home? Can you separate that somehow so that us poor readers get a heads up on it? Thanks!
| KJay99 chapter 3 . 12/22/2012
Yay more! I feel like there's lots to comment on this chapter- but I just don't know enough to say something intelligent. So- I'll say... umm... nice story building chapter. and wonderful scenery.
| steampunk-archer chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
Very nice,I looks forward to more. Especially some Artie, he's just to cute:)
| dragooonthegreat chapter 2 . 12/16/2012
continue soon please? this is leading somewhere and if i were pete or myka i would not be staying in that hotel!
| moxy chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
Its heading somewhere keep it going :)