Reviews for If You're Not Careful
SilverStream12 chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
you should totally make this into an actual story! I tried to keep a straight at the image of some one attacking her and then well let just say the attacker was never to found again ._. probably burned alive! XD
nyx189 chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
This seems like its gonna be an amaxing story! Wish there was more to read though!
BigReader16 chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
WHY CANT IT BE LONGER!? I WOULD BE ABSOLUTLELY IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY IF IT WAS!
Yummie de Pummie chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
I really liked this story! It has a lot of potential so I hope you continue it. Ive always wanted to reada a dragon adventurer story. Keep writing! :)
TheChampionOfLight chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
I think you should definetly make it into a proper story cause this is awsome especialy if this part is on earth and the get taken to Lore.
P.S. Imagine the look on Drakath's face when he attacks this hero and gets attacked by someone who say's he's a Dragon
LOL