Reviews for Ranma, the Naive Succubus 02: Arrivals
Guest chapter 8 . 7/11/2014
nothing against your story or your writing, but that just seemed... to easy.
Byakugan789 chapter 7 . 7/8/2014
Rofl. Poor Ryoga. Two crazy amazon chicks after his porky ass. I've gotta admit to curiosity, you disqualified ranma based on his jusenkyo cures, why was that different from the panda or the pig?
Byakugan789 chapter 6 . 7/8/2014
Two points of solving and stuff.
1) Perhaps not the best way to go about it, but you could have Nabiki mail the guide at Jusenkyo and purchase some spring of the drowned man water. Then, whenever Ranma needs a guy, splash goes Nabiki, sex, a hot soak, and sex again! Woohoo!
Families reputation could possibly take a hit from having an aquatransexual wife, but then it didn't seem to matter to Tsoun or really anyone but the daughters that they were going to have an aquatransexual husband...
2) These are not mutually excusive by the way. But if ranma is missing the signs because he can't taste emotions anymore and that's keeping him from getting it up, well, the obvious answer is to train him in magic! Considering his mother can do it, there's a good chance he can as well. Not as good as if his dad could do magic and see the supernatural, but still there. And his nature as a succubus would probably only help his power grow. First thing he learns as soon as he starts getting the hang of spells will naturally be Empathy since that's the entire focus of the exercise.

Nice scene with Nodoka btw.
Byakugan789 chapter 4 . 7/8/2014
A solution to Xian Pu's problem, since you won't apparently let her go back to canon insanity could be for Ranma to whip Tsoun's ass into shape, have him defeat the old panda, defeat Xian Pu and do both in front of the hunters. Tsuon isn't any great prize either, but he's got two things going for him. He's not married, and he's most definitely not Genma. That last one alone should really be all the incentive she needs. Aside from being emotionally fragile the Tendo Patriarch isn't really that bad a guy. Loyal, caring, passionate, formerly a wonderful martial artist, and still capable of manifesting a titanic battle aura and samurai armor out of pure Chi. He just needs to get his head out of his ass. Grief over his wife's death, certainly, but after seven years most people have recovered.
Fast Frank chapter 9 . 5/14/2014
"But he couldn't remember..." Of course it should be "couldn't forget".
Blackholelord chapter 10 . 11/8/2013
Well its a nice continue story.
shugokage chapter 10 . 2/19/2013
Another amazing story!
kenegi chapter 10 . 2/13/2013
Oh wow you really made Genma look like a decent guy.
James Birdsong chapter 10 . 1/21/2013
Good work.
Rose1948 chapter 10 . 12/18/2012
Again, another nice chapter. I honestly like how this is coming along. Nice to see Genma getting some sort of payback for all his crap. Looking forward to the next chapter.
jabber185 chapter 9 . 12/17/2012
Yowza! A perfectly exilerating read! Even with longer than average chapters, they fly by quickly because of the wonderful talent they come from. Keep cranking em out my friend!
Rose1948 chapter 9 . 12/17/2012
*chuckles* Looks like payback time's a-comin' for ol' Genma. *cackles* I'm looking forward to more!
Rose1948 chapter 8 . 12/16/2012
Yay for long stories! And I'm young enough to remember those Saturday morning serials that they played on TV because I'm not old enough to remember those serials at the theaters. *chuckles*

Good chapter, hon. I enjoyed it. Looking forward to the next installment.
Rose1948 chapter 7 . 12/15/2012
*chuckles* So now Ryoga is Shampoo's new husband? Hoo boy! This is getting to have more twists and turns than a ball of yarn after a cat gets a hold of it! Awesome!
Rose1948 chapter 6 . 12/14/2012
I don't mind short chapters-especially when I'm tired or have a cat wanting on my keyboard. *laughs*

That they do. Oh yes indeedy! Although I'm thinking sane is relative when speaking of the Ranma 1/2 cast. *snickers* Nice chapter, however. Nice and informative. *nods*
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