Overpowering Gaara? Check
Overpowrring Kisame? Check
Make Naruto pathetic? Check...

And until then it was so good... sigh*

You really nerfed Naruro here too much.

At this point he shouldn't really have trouble to beat Deidara... But with you and your nerfing of his Chakra reserves...

good story.

I know this is completed. However, if he has CRA then I say Tayuya, Hana, Anko for sure.

Yellow and red makes orange

This is the sole reason I really dislike your stories, you have no concept of how power in the Naruto universe works and your idea of chakra is ignorant at best.

Naruto feeling exhausted after a few seconds of Shinos bugs draining him? Naruto has more chakra than a kage, you're basically saying that Shino could drain the chakra of a kage in a few seconds, how dumb is that?

I don't know how in the world there exist a person that can be so oblivious to any logic that no red light goes off in their head writing this kind of scene ;p
So... why did Obito not simply kidnap them and any other biju they need if he can just teleport near them when they are 100% helpless like that?
This is even worse than the retarded scene where naruto got knocked out by some random fisherman cos "the fisherman has no chakra 100% better ninja than any ninja".

Sigh. Yeah this is too tiring to read to even finish, despite best honest efforts this is objectively utterly unreadable.

It's weird how many fanfics seem to have Jesus as a Konoha Shinobi and never even show him or tell what heppened to him for his birthday to become a holiday.
I wonder if he had a kekkei genkai... and if HE was the one to invent water walking. Some more background info please ya all.

I read this a good few months ago (could have been last year, I don't recall exactly how long ago it was) but I really am glad to find it again. NaruTayu is a bit of a crack pairing, but good gravy, there's so many good fics for them here. and yours is the cream of the crop. Honestly, I don't remember if I finished it, but I will.

I hate Orochimaru. And of course, Naruto won’t know fuinjutsu so he can’t remove her seal so this just adds drama to the story.

Interesting and amusing, Tayuya played that merchant.

Rather amusing chapter there, a flashback one so to speak, it's weird that sometimes Naruto comes across as dumb, no, even dummer than his canon self and other times is smart it's weird.

Well, that was amusing, and Itachi got his ass handed to him foolish Uchiha. Still don't know why they are still in Konoha, Naruto I can sort of understand but Gaara he's Suna's Jinchuriki, it makes 0 sense.

Well, this was kind of surprising I don't know why they didn't return to Konoha why haven't they exactly it makes 0 sense.