| Reviews for Yellow and Red makes |
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   stevesgaming87 chapter 1 . 9/12/2019 this one lost me on girl kyuubi |
| Autobot-Wolfsketch chapter 66 . 9/8/2019 This was a great story and I really enjoyed it definitely different from the other ones that I've read. |
| LLB11 chapter 5 . 8/26/2019 Im loving this fic! I hope that Tayuya has her flute in the near future! |
| Paul Lenzen chapter 66 . 8/15/2019 This has one of the best endings I've read in a long time... Damn good job on this fic... |
| Red.cloud.Yura chapter 2 . 7/25/2019 Why is he seven and a half when he just had his birthday? |
| Klajdi chapter 66 . 7/4/2019 Great bloody story! Absolutely love it! |
| Chue19 chapter 17 . 7/2/2019 Aww that kiss was so sweet |
| Oblivious IJ chapter 24 . 6/7/2019 Gaara:... your move... Everyone: (Yeeeaaaah not happening) |
| Oblivious IJ chapter 22 . 6/7/2019 Anko is a pedo :P |
| Oblivious IJ chapter 1 . 6/6/2019 ... that's not the Kyuubi... it's definitely Ero-snake |
| Guest chapter 37 . 3/10/2019 First up how do non-Shinobi acquire smtn like that? And if its a Copy/Rip-Off i dont think it coule fucking contain the Kyuubi... That was a Plot Device |
| Guest chapter 30 . 3/9/2019 Ik you did it for Storytelling Purposes since otherwise Naruto would be too OP early on, but he can easily produce 1000s of Clones, especially when trained right and with WAY better Control(despite Kage Bunshin only needing a Chakra Powerhouse)and with way more Trainin and the Technique doesnt have a Backlash if he just dispels them in Turns and not all at once. Also he wouldnt feel Damage inflicted on them after they dispel. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2019 Again youre a great Writer but then again this is the ugliest Description ive ever read of his Childhood Years and making you genuenily cry(not like Eyes of the Broken Soul). But once again this just shows how actually no one deserves to be seen even ad Teammate by Naruto in Canon... and SasQay talks about having it hard SMH |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2019 Gotta say it again: Ur a absolutely Great Writer! Not even 1/3 into Chapter 1 and i got all the Feels and just wanna see Naruto tear thru the whole of Konoha, The too, Kakashi and Jiraiya(Canon was one of my Favorite Characters, but Fanfiction actually when staying true to Canon brought more to my Eyes and let me see from different Perspectives) But anyways rly hopin ur Description refers to Naruto and his Character(i.e. he wont take this BS and Lash out... E!) |
| Mugglewizard chapter 14 . 12/20/2018 I like how the story has started. The whole Fox immediately being friendly thing initially put me off, but since I had read some of your other stories and enjoyed them, I kept at it. I really thought that Konan and Nagato would raise Naruto. That would be an interesting fork if you were to consider writing it. It would probably be at this point just before Yahiko dies but because of Naruto, Nagato would probably not go off with Tobi. One thing though, how comes Konoha were OK with their Jinchuriki being in Suna. That should have probably sparked a war. |