|Reviews for Yellow and Red makes|
| Guest chapter 56 . 9/11
Overpowering Gaara? Check
Overpowrring Kisame? Check
Make Naruto pathetic? Check...
And until then it was so good... sigh*
| Guest chapter 41 . 8/30
You really nerfed Naruro here too much.
| Guest chapter 41 . 8/30
At this point he shouldn't really have trouble to beat Deidara... But with you and your nerfing of his Chakra reserves...
| Zeke Hooper chapter 66 . 8/1
| N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 13 . 6/3
I know this is completed. However, if he has CRA then I say Tayuya, Hana, Anko for sure.
| Aayan chapter 2 . 3/21
Yellow and red makes orange
| XenoLucifer chapter 21 . 3/15
This is the sole reason I really dislike your stories, you have no concept of how power in the Naruto universe works and your idea of chakra is ignorant at best.
Naruto feeling exhausted after a few seconds of Shinos bugs draining him? Naruto has more chakra than a kage, you're basically saying that Shino could drain the chakra of a kage in a few seconds, how dumb is that?
| GloriouSin chapter 53 . 1/9
I don't know how in the world there exist a person that can be so oblivious to any logic that no red light goes off in their head writing this kind of scene ;p
So... why did Obito not simply kidnap them and any other biju they need if he can just teleport near them when they are 100% helpless like that?
This is even worse than the retarded scene where naruto got knocked out by some random fisherman cos "the fisherman has no chakra 100% better ninja than any ninja".
Sigh. Yeah this is too tiring to read to even finish, despite best honest efforts this is objectively utterly unreadable.
| GloriouSin chapter 17 . 1/7
It's weird how many fanfics seem to have Jesus as a Konoha Shinobi and never even show him or tell what heppened to him for his birthday to become a holiday.
I wonder if he had a kekkei genkai... and if HE was the one to invent water walking. Some more background info please ya all.
| PajamaPants Studios chapter 1 . 12/10/2022
I read this a good few months ago (could have been last year, I don't recall exactly how long ago it was) but I really am glad to find it again. NaruTayu is a bit of a crack pairing, but good gravy, there's so many good fics for them here. and yours is the cream of the crop. Honestly, I don't remember if I finished it, but I will.
| Write Your Wrongs chapter 14 . 11/29/2022
I hate Orochimaru. And of course, Naruto won’t know fuinjutsu so he can’t remove her seal so this just adds drama to the story.
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 25 . 11/17/2022
Interesting and amusing, Tayuya played that merchant.
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 24 . 11/17/2022
Rather amusing chapter there, a flashback one so to speak, it's weird that sometimes Naruto comes across as dumb, no, even dummer than his canon self and other times is smart it's weird.
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 23 . 11/17/2022
Well, that was amusing, and Itachi got his ass handed to him foolish Uchiha. Still don't know why they are still in Konoha, Naruto I can sort of understand but Gaara he's Suna's Jinchuriki, it makes 0 sense.
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 22 . 11/16/2022
Well, this was kind of surprising I don't know why they didn't return to Konoha why haven't they exactly it makes 0 sense.