|Reviews for Mind games|
| EternalDreamerEnchanted chapter 16 . 1/26
You know, I think that is a great way to end. It is a hopeful ending and you know they are happy.
| Anvan chapter 5 . 1/4
I've gotten this far with a wide grin, just so you know already. *grins*
| Anvan chapter 16 . 1/5
I have the impression my reviews from yesterday never made it through, because I wasn't logged in. So here goes, after reading to the end. You made me laugh! I love how these two interact and Harry becomes very cheeky, as their relationship progresses. You managed to make Severus very likeable and appealing, though I've always had a weakness for him anyway.
The open ending works nicely, though my mind immediately reeled when I saw the conundrum they're in (Harry being a Horcrux and all) and I was like "This can work!", but this ending is interesting, a turn I didn't expect. You took a few more. In all honesty, I initially expected Severus to like Harry, because he looked like Lily (well, the eyes), but your choice makes more sense.
Well done, I'm glad we shared! *smiles* Let's write together?
| Kuma Riddle xD chapter 16 . 7/23/2015
I dislike you for this.
Obviously I'm unhappy with the endding, nevertheless; great story.
I wish you'd tell me where they dissapeared to.
To a little hut.
Did they SUICIDE ?
| Begumebilli chapter 13 . 11/13/2014
Really?! The man tells him that he is thinking of his father while with him and he is okay with it? Weird!
| serenityselena chapter 16 . 11/1/2014
oh my... some really unexpected twists in their lives...
great story :)
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/22/2014
Personally, I love open endings. Please write more, I like how your mind thinks :)
| Strikersky chapter 15 . 2/7/2014
Hello, call me Strikersky
I would just like to let you know I loved your story, really.
I have been reading quite a bit of Harry Potter Fan fictions, and I found myself enjoying this much more than I planned...
HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME HANGING!
I swear I WILL Avada Kedavra you on the street if you leave me like this!
But if you don't it's okay...
I really liked you story even like this,
Thank you for the good story.
| Evesgreenleaf chapter 16 . 12/22/2013
The title says it all Mind Games; i loved it
| Evesgreenleaf chapter 15 . 12/22/2013
I love it! Twisted!
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/12/2013
I can't read this story anymore... it feels corny, very unnatural. A good effort.
| YenGirl chapter 11 . 11/1/2013
Ah well, it was too much to hope that Ron would be all hunky dory with the news. It is more fitting to his character that he rant and rave... only I hope he will come around and that he will get a chance to see the real Severus. Hermione is true to character too - well done!
It's... it's a relief that Dumbledore knows and hasn't put a stop to their relationship. But then again, Harry is of age. I find it strange to picture a Severus howling with laughter, but it made me smile.
Your Severus has many facets to him indeed. I'm hoping they will live happily every after... it does look that way!
| YenGirl chapter 10 . 11/1/2013
Ah, damnit! Just when I almost convince myself that I can tolerate a Severus with a streak of cruelty (or dominance?) in him as long as he loves Harry... he goes all sweet and soft in this chapter. *shakes her head, torn between vexation and amusement*
I like him very much here. Very much indeed. And I also like the idea of him being a parent and a lover to Harry... I'm just... not into the spanking.
But Severus is sweet in this chapter :) Maybe I like it when he's sick and can't do anything to Harry! LOL...
| YenGirl chapter 9 . 11/1/2013
Wow, what a chapter! But I'm glad Ron and Hermione know... I love stories that have the trio sticking together through thick and thin. Even through the Snarry :) so I hope that happens here as well.
Your Severus and your Harry are complicated. I might be complaining but you are weaving a story with complicated characters and that is good *smiles* so don't mind my whining that they're both not pure white LOL
The important thing is that Severus loves Harry and vice versa. *nods to herself*
And I do like Harry blushing :)
| YenGirl chapter 8 . 11/1/2013
Poor Harry! His life has turned upside down ever since he had those lessons with Severus! *smiles and shakes her head*
I'm positive Dumbledore knows now and Harry hates to be the woman kept back at the house.. waiting and showing a brave front. He won't be the only one to be angry if something goes wrong. I would too...
Oh, that - that isn't...? Is it?!