Reviews for Mind games
Begumebilli chapter 13 . 11/13/2014
Really?! The man tells him that he is thinking of his father while with him and he is okay with it? Weird!
serenityselena chapter 16 . 11/1/2014
oh my... some really unexpected twists in their lives...
great story :)
Guest chapter 16 . 5/22/2014
Personally, I love open endings. Please write more, I like how your mind thinks :)
Strikersky chapter 15 . 2/7/2014
Hello, call me Strikersky
I would just like to let you know I loved your story, really.
I have been reading quite a bit of Harry Potter Fan fictions, and I found myself enjoying this much more than I planned...
But...
HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME HANGING!
I swear I WILL Avada Kedavra you on the street if you leave me like this!
But if you don't it's okay...
I really liked you story even like this,

Thank you for the good story.

Strikersky
Evesgreenleaf chapter 16 . 12/22/2013
The title says it all Mind Games; i loved it
Evesgreenleaf chapter 15 . 12/22/2013
I love it! Twisted!
Guest chapter 3 . 12/12/2013
I can't read this story anymore... it feels corny, very unnatural. A good effort.
YenGirl chapter 11 . 11/1/2013
Ah well, it was too much to hope that Ron would be all hunky dory with the news. It is more fitting to his character that he rant and rave... only I hope he will come around and that he will get a chance to see the real Severus. Hermione is true to character too - well done!

It's... it's a relief that Dumbledore knows and hasn't put a stop to their relationship. But then again, Harry is of age. I find it strange to picture a Severus howling with laughter, but it made me smile.

Your Severus has many facets to him indeed. I'm hoping they will live happily every after... it does look that way!
YenGirl chapter 10 . 11/1/2013
Ah, damnit! Just when I almost convince myself that I can tolerate a Severus with a streak of cruelty (or dominance?) in him as long as he loves Harry... he goes all sweet and soft in this chapter. *shakes her head, torn between vexation and amusement*

I like him very much here. Very much indeed. And I also like the idea of him being a parent and a lover to Harry... I'm just... not into the spanking.

But Severus is sweet in this chapter :) Maybe I like it when he's sick and can't do anything to Harry! LOL...
YenGirl chapter 9 . 11/1/2013
Wow, what a chapter! But I'm glad Ron and Hermione know... I love stories that have the trio sticking together through thick and thin. Even through the Snarry :) so I hope that happens here as well.

Your Severus and your Harry are complicated. I might be complaining but you are weaving a story with complicated characters and that is good *smiles* so don't mind my whining that they're both not pure white LOL

The important thing is that Severus loves Harry and vice versa. *nods to herself*

And I do like Harry blushing :)
YenGirl chapter 8 . 11/1/2013
Poor Harry! His life has turned upside down ever since he had those lessons with Severus! *smiles and shakes her head*

I'm positive Dumbledore knows now and Harry hates to be the woman kept back at the house.. waiting and showing a brave front. He won't be the only one to be angry if something goes wrong. I would too...

Oh, that - that isn't...? Is it?!
YenGirl chapter 7 . 11/1/2013
Oh, damn. Now I don't know what to feel like! The start of the chapter didn't make feel very kindly to Severus - I hope that's only a nightmare and not something that will happen. But the rest of it... yes, I think Dumbledore knows there is something going on between Severus and Harry (wouldn't take a genius to see that!).

But Severus going on a horcurx hunt by himself... is that good? I hope so. But now I'm not sure. *frowns*
YenGirl chapter 6 . 11/1/2013
Yes, your Severus is already way more cruel than how I would write him. *sighs* But he loves Harry. He does. Even though I wish Harry had gotten his hands on some healing balm :)

If Harry really dares to steal Veritaserum and even worse, administers it to Severus... well, the you know what is definitely going to hit the fan. In a big way. I'm glad Harry is distracted now...
YenGirl chapter 5 . 11/1/2013
You Harry is so cute - I find myself giggling over his thoughts.. especially when you used phrases like 'poke the bear' and Harry's thoughts on 'wallflower'... aww.

But your Severus is still... *flails* I really don't know how to describe him, but I seem to be frowning each chapter! He is way darker than how I would (or could) ever write him. *shrugs* But everyone who's read stories know I like things very sweet and light anyway!

But he is definitely a very, very confident man and something in me just feels like he is stringing Harry along. I hope he isn't, I'm going to cry buckets and get very angry with everyone if this doesn't end happily... *slightly worried look*
YenGirl chapter 4 . 11/1/2013
Sorry for the month long delay *hides her face* I got caught up with so many other things, some of them you already know about :)

*reads the chapter with a smile that grows bigger and bigger before getting smaller again towards the end of the chapter* Erm, your Severus is complicated. I suppose he's just having his revenge on Harry for forcing him go all the way from the dungeons to Gryffindor Tower? Or because Harry said no to him?

Harry was... lovely, a nice combination of innocence and scorching fantasies (some really yummy ones *fans herself*) and being attracted to Severus. I'm glad you didn't have them doing the naughty so fast. I love stories that draw it out and I melted when Harry said no...

Severus wanting to make love to Harry in his mind was sweet, so sweet... which is why I'm not sure now why he was a bit cruel to him at the end. Hmm. Well, at least he told Harry he loved him. I have to read more now.
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