|Reviews for The Club Battle Ninja Tournament!|
| Princess Unikitty chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
This is an interesting story to date with one very fatal flaw: the prose is boring. I usually criticize fics for not trying to strike a balance between dialogue and description, but at least they're interesting to read. This is just... why are there *so* many one-liners? Why does each and every character need to speak at least once per scene? I realize this is an anime crossover, so people will talk a lot, but the way you're translating this into textual form just doesn't work.
At the very least, your characterization is great when it gets the chance to shine through, so keep that up.
| Maverick chapter 6 . 11/1/2013
Are you going to finish this? It was just getting good.
| pokemon fan 1991 chapter 3 . 6/23/2013
This chapter is okay
| pokemon fan 1991 chapter 2 . 6/23/2013
| pokemon fan 1991 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
this was an okay chapter
| NodokaLover chapter 5 . 6/23/2013
I think Axew & scraggy will evolve in the next chapter
| NodokaLover chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Masamune's Timburr evolves into Gurdurr & defeats Yamoto's Seismitoad
Ino's Lilligant defeats Iris's Excadrill