Reviews for Melting Away the Black Ice
Mysterie1985 chapter 3 . 2/20
oh geez... poor Jack... O.O
Wolfisis chapter 16 . 1/2
Awwww, a bit dark but I loved it none the less.
brightT3ars chapter 16 . 5/16/2014
I didn't like it...I LOVE It! The ending was cute! Good job! *gives u thumbs up* :3
Guest chapter 16 . 6/26/2013
Ah - 4:40 in the morning on a summer night, radio going, family asleep or at work and reading a FANTASTIC story. What could be better than this. ... . Well... Maybe if Jack and Bunny were real... And they were actually together... And really did have kids... And I was the godmother who could secrtely find her way into watching them during "Moments"... *.* ... I must find a way to make this reality. XD But seriously, I loved this. Stayed up all night to read it. I was looking for a long fic like this, so I'm VERY glad that I found this one. I loved the kids and I could totally see the Pitch you portrayed in here. All in all, another favorite. v
Pouoka chapter 4 . 6/20/2013
First of all I wanted to say that I like your story very much and can't wait to read the rest of the story. But there were some phrases in Russian in this chapter, so I can not but offer you some help with them (your versoins are not correct). Sorry if my offer is not wanted, but your story is really good, so I thought you'd like it to be good in everything))

Anyway, there are the versions of translation of you phrases in the way we use them in Russia (in situations like in your story):

Is he going to be okay? - С ним все будет хорошо?
How bad are the wounds? - Насколько серьезны его раны?

P.S.: Bunny's reaction to pregnancy is fantastic!))))
(sorry for possible grammer mistakes, I have much more experience in translating from English into Russian than other way)
BurningStylus chapter 4 . 3/16/2013
Omg XD
"Can the same happen to us?-"
"Drop subject!"
Night-Fury1 chapter 16 . 2/8/2013
loved this story... kinda think it might be funny if aster and jack get some 'alone time'... and the kids barge in on them!

try explainin that one! *rolls on floor laughing*
TheFannishaUsui chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Hi! ) I love your fanfic n.n and i want translate in spanish, can i? please!
aquodox chapter 16 . 1/19/2013
This was my first jackrabbit story I have read, and that it is over I feel sad, but pleased at the same time. I enjoyed the time spent reading this. Thank you for writing this, it is truly amazing.
Every1's Beta chapter 16 . 1/19/2013
OH NO!

It...its over... :(

:Cries tears of extreme depression then goes back and rereads fic...twice:

But to be entirely honest, this fic was AMAZING. The children seemed realistic, Jack and Bunny were in character, everyone else was in character...it was just...lovely
Marlie Parson chapter 16 . 1/19/2013
This was an amazing story!

Thanks for the good read!
Optomistic Emo Kleptomaniac chapter 16 . 1/19/2013
Nooo its finished ahh this was soo cute though ! :3
TheGodlessAngelOfDarkness chapter 16 . 1/18/2013
O_O You can't see it but my eyes are twinkling with joy and lust at what I have just read... I love you.
yay chapter 15 . 1/13/2013
Thank you for always updating, so quickly. Thanks for the upcoming love scene.
Marlie Parson chapter 15 . 1/12/2013
Coolio!
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