Reviews for Orange Peonies
fleur-de-fey chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
Wow, that was beautifully written. You did an amazing job of conveying Red's love for Yellow and all the memories they built together. I especially love how you were able to get Red's change of feelings to transcend to the readers-to the point where I kept expecting Yellow to arrive over the hill at any moment now, only to be hit with the (shocking) realization that neither was she coming nor was Red even on the hill. The abrupt change in scenery and mood worked well to make the rude awakening all the more poignant and heartbreaking.

Fantastically written and thanks for the wonderful read!
bigcow123456 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
This was so beautiful ;_; Keep up the good work!
NoProb101 chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
This was so beautiful, it made me cry!
I loved it! *sniffle*
It was seriously beyond compare, beautiful.
Please, if you can, write more one-shots as good as this. :-)
True M. Vega chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Truly incredible. A sorrowful story that didn't make me sad at the end, but rather at peace. Great job
Glaceon1362 chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
;-; I'm actually crying
Second chapter?
Random Visitor Girl chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
*Whimpers* I'm gonna cry... It's beautiful... IT'S BEAUTIFUL! *Sobs* :''(
So Sad...
sumikitty chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
This... was beautiful... TTTT I love it so much... -breaks down into happy tears-

I love how Red memorized exactly when Yellow would come up and such, and how he got so worried when he heard the word battle... :D