|Reviews for The Onyx Stars|
| Zeus501 chapter 3 . 3/20
the UNSC Infinity carrys 10 Strident Heavy frigates...not Charon Light Frigates...the Stridents are far superior to the Charon's
| Zeus501 chapter 1 . 3/20
ummmm...the Charons fire 600 tonne rounds, and the Infinity fires a very powerful round as well...i have seen on a halo fic the number 1200...that seems good to me...but the Infinity's mac guns are the most powerful MACs outside of a Super MAC, which fires a 3000 tonne round
| highlander348 chapter 16 . 2/21
Are you still alive?
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 16 . 12/3/2016
| Warrior19 chapter 16 . 11/18/2016
I hope you are well. I patiently await the continuation of this epic saga of a story. I wholeheartedly believe that this is one of the most well-devised and meaningful "crossovers" between the epic saga of Halo and the Mass Effect story lines. I so very much enjoy the interaction that VADM Preston Cole has with the others that are "stuck" in the world of Mass Effect.
I await the rise of the "Star Serpent", who will show the "Pinnacle", just what one human and his flagship can do...
| lodown chapter 16 . 9/12/2016
Great sorry... Shame you haven't finished it.
| ThedemonlordPingu chapter 16 . 8/25/2016
please update soon
i am not sure how i feel about the unsc getting the assess handed to them by the reapers, i know that they have been augmented with forerunner tech but the unsc just seemed like they are getting the asses handed to them at every turn
| Haxler chapter 16 . 7/29/2016
even with all of the little typos and autocorrect-fails i like this very much, cried when lasky died, why him whyyyyyy!(xD) pity that it has been atleast a year without updates
| chibi reaper chapter 16 . 3/28/2016
on one hand, i quite like this story, but on the other hand, it's a complete mess.
lots of stuff that isn't explained all too well or at all, not a whole lot in the way of desciptions either.
overall, it's not a bad story, even if a lot of it comes across as a hot mess.
| tH1s chapter 3 . 2/29/2016
Well written, makes sense and an interesting take on plot.
I admire you for three things. First you did not tell the natives that they were from another universe. I don't get why a lot of fanfics tend to spill the beans when it is highly unnecessary. Second, the story is not centered around Master Chief. I am tired how seeing in every operation. Third, you did not paint the citadel as a government of idiots. Forth, Lasky is being manipulative and I like it. Fifth, Spartacus did not go crazy when they realize that the UNSC utilizes AI.
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/21/2016
This is what you leave us with!?
| Cassidy chapter 3 . 9/5/2015
Wow-I mean wow!(chapter3)
The action. the suspense! The intrigue of the illusive man...
I don't know where you get your knowledge and 'experience' to pull off a space battle...hell, you sound like you know your shit.:}}}}}}} All that Navy talk and alpha threw charlie stuff with your 'so many degrees per the 'somthing' effect-'
I mean WOW. God bless and preserve that mind of your's; what a wonderful thing.
| Cassidy chapter 2 . 9/5/2015
(I forgot how my name started...stupid me:p )
Very enjoyable, I'm on chapter two. Poor Cortana! Poor John!
Go Lasky...and we got Buck!? What the hell huh? :}
| Space-Cassidy chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
Where the hell did I even get that name right:}}}}
Dude! Or-Girl! This was awe inspiring-the level of detail and action-the knowledge of all things Halo-...I mean WOW. Go grand! (I have NO knowledge of the Mass Effect universe) "So-this...is going to be fun."
| Jarvey chapter 16 . 7/16/2015
Not quite early spring, but looking forward to it.