|Reviews for Just Another Ordinary Day|
| yellow 14 chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Holiday, not vacation. Still, not bad. Keep writing
| The Crownless Queen chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Hi :) This was nice :p I don't really like OCs but it was nice, though I think you should have developped Adam's character a bit more...
I think that there "Lily, rather or not Louis has a girlfriend or a crush on a girl I hope that you don't do anything stupid about this information." you should put whether instead of rather. And there is too much 'said' :p
But it was quite nice ;)