Reviews for Fifty Shades of Infidelity
Shelby chapter 16 . 4/30/2013
Best chapter I've read yet! Laughed by butt off!
Shelby chapter 10 . 4/29/2013
Finally! I was so anxious for that Ana/Ethan scene! So freaking good!
Shelby chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
Ooh...some Ethan/Ana action?! I like it!
Guest chapter 31 . 4/19/2013
Ethan is a fucking bastard. He doesn't know what loyalty means. he is with Mia but he makes a pass at Ana? What a dick.
Ollie88 chapter 9 . 4/6/2013
OMG this is brilliant, I can't leave it down! I feel so sorry for Christian:-(
Jaliz06 chapter 40 . 3/30/2013
I truly enjoyed reading this story! Now on to the sequel!
dlk6995 chapter 37 . 3/25/2013
Great writing! THANK YOU!1
dlk6995 chapter 34 . 3/25/2013
I was in such a hurry to get to this part...I knew it was Elena,,,she wants Christian so bad...she's crazy enough to think that he'll come back to her old ass! I don't care how good she looks for her age! I hope CG takes her down...keep it coming hun...for only 17, you are pretty darn good ;)
dlk6995 chapter 28 . 3/25/2013
I love to leave comments, however, I find myself in a hurry to get to the next chapter. Please hear this, I'm impressed
dlk6995 chapter 13 . 3/24/2013
dlk6995 chapter 9 . 3/24/2013
OMG! This chapter has me on edge! Great writing...keep it up please!
dlk6995 chapter 2 . 3/24/2013
Great! Keep it going...
dlk6995 chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Please far so good
BEA M DE F chapter 17 . 3/24/2013
Hi...i just give you my advise as a "50 shades of grey" reader,the original one I mean...
I know for your writing that you are young, i think i can remember you saying that you were not going to explain everything in the sex scenes...I HONESTLY tell that sex has to be or very well explained...or just passed...don't mention or just say something that can be a beginning and something that leads to an end...but you need to focus on what's next because you start talking about kissing and then change subject and I really DON'T GET IT! Honestly, just use clear words! kiss is kiss, fuck is fuck, lick is know what i mean...just an advise! :)
BEA M DE F chapter 9 . 3/24/2013
i really like the story!i will review more later...but from get my attention!
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