|Reviews for Fifty Shades of Infidelity|
| booby tits chapter 6 . 3/15
| booby tits chapter 5 . 3/15
| Sweet Peach75 chapter 15 . 3/9
We all know there is no way Christian would let Ethan or Jose near Ana. There's no way Ana would be sitting on Ethan's lap...The grammar in this story makes it hard to follow.
| Love50Shades chapter 25 . 3/7
the beginning was harsh - can't really see christian cheating on ana but read through to see where you were going with story and the fact you said they would end up together later in story pushed me to continue reading. i am reaching up to chapter 26 and once they made up i really enjoyed the banter between christian and ana. weird to see the different angle with kate and ethan and sawyer. i enjoyed reading the game night at kate and ana apt where they played spin the bottle. kate and christian humping was too funny. and the girl fight after with kate and ana was ok but laughing more with christian and how calm he was. i also liked the friendship with sawyer and ana. the triangle with ethan, christian and ana is funny on how christian is always watching ethan with caution.
keep up the writing - you are good. so far the sex scene writing is on point. i always like when christian is in charge
| malugargula chapter 40 . 2/26
Love this fic
| Wmonifeagmail.c chapter 42 . 2/24
Good writing couldn't stop reading
| Guest chapter 22 . 2/20
This made me so happy. I've never ever encountered a fighting ana!
| 1slandGrown chapter 4 . 2/16
Wow, youre a very talented writer. I just got into this site, someone on twitter suggested it. I dont know if youre still writing but you do good work. :)
| kristieb chapter 22 . 2/14
Omg...this is great. I havent laghed at a story this much in a while.
| kristieb chapter 15 . 2/14
Im new to this story...and Im hooked!
| Claire1975 chapter 1 . 2/13
Oohhh good start to this fix. Hooked can't wait to read more
| Sam 'Dimples' Swarek chapter 1 . 2/11
It still makes me sick to read this. It's like my hearts been whipped in two. I'm so glad it wasn't in the film
| Ok chapter 42 . 2/3
I don't understand what is your obsession with writing Ana as a weak slut and Christian as an idiotic slut is about? Mommy daddy issues?
| Guest chapter 31 . 1/31
Ethan is an asshole and Ana is a user. Who the hell does that. She should put herself in Mia's shoes and see if she would still feel good about it. What happens if Christian comfort a friend (lets say Elena) like how Ethan is doing with her and she is standing right next to them. Would she still feel secure. No, she would not because she is the most insecure person on planet earth and yet she doesn't have consideration for Mia at all. Ana is a user and she is a selfish bitch.
| MaryMS chapter 17 . 1/29
I am just so disgusted that your Ana, as always, is so weak & quick to forgiveChristian. Whether neither he nor Leila orgasmed the fact is he wasn't just going to fuck her he was going to make love to her in order "to heal her". Really u unforgivable, particularly not even a half hour after she had been standing in Ana's own apartment. Whether Christian saw Leila's smug look to Ana or not the fact that he personally would bath her in Ana's apartment, clothe her in Ana's own clothes and even think that it was acceptable to try to heal her but making love to her is utterly unforgivable. It just shows that at some level he cares for her, even if it is only guilt and he certainly isn't sufficiently committed to his supposed 'great love ' for Ana.. To betray Ana in that way, my God he is selfish, so incredibly self absorbd.
She needs to grow up and stop letting him always put her feelings behind everyone (all of his ex's) else's. It just makes her pathetic. She has no self respect, it is appalling.