Reviews for Tal - Maqluba
makiva chapter 2 . 2/7/2013
My inner Grammar Nazi is searching for his RPG to blast all spelling mistakes into oblivion.
makiva chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Your style of writing is rather pleasant, though little grammar errors here and there reduce the pleasure of reading the story. A beta reader could come in handy here.
Off to read the rest of the story!
PS. It's moleskin, not mokeskin. Excuse my grammar-Naziness please.
Sharon T chapter 8 . 1/31/2013
Loveing the story and excited for the next chapter :-)
fraewyn chapter 8 . 1/27/2013
Can't wait for more!
Meadow7 chapter 8 . 1/24/2013
thank you and hopefully next chapter will be loooooooong XD
Meadow7 chapter 6 . 1/24/2013
yes finally a long chapter
Meadow7 chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
Actually it is good 8D how old is his body now though?
Meadow7 chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
I wounder how he will escape ?
Meadow7 chapter 3 . 1/24/2013
WELL! leans forward that was funny
Meadow7 chapter 2 . 1/24/2013
Ok Harry you are not the only one in the dark where on earth is Malta?
Tal-Maqluba sounds like Arabic or Egyptian
I cant wait to read the next chapter even though its on the next page &D
Meadow7 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
wow that was quite good chapter well written and interesting I dont usually read story's this short but I had nothing good to read today so haunting for story's couldn't find any god ones decided to give short story a try I have to say I made unexpectedly a good decision.
jpottermalfoy chapter 8 . 1/22/2013
You don't usually find a de-aged fic where the subject keeps his regular age mind! Looks good so far. Hope you update again soon!
galyardt chapter 8 . 1/19/2013
this is cool
otaco chapter 8 . 1/15/2013
Please continue, this is so so good! Thanks!
chibichibi98 chapter 8 . 1/10/2013
Wow I can't believe the amount if trouble harry got into. I really love the story and I can't wait to read more.
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