|Reviews for Two Families|
| fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 1/11
The way this chapter begins and ends in a linked way is fitting. It encompasses a journey of life through growing and experiencing things. Through hardship and surprises, each couples life is colored brilliantly and in a memorable way.
I'll share that after trying so hard, I almost thought Hinata would have a boy, but I am glad true happiness of just having a baby really did shine through. Thanks for sharing!
| chibi beary chapter 2 . 12/12/2012
very nice! second chapter has proper dialogs but the first chappie was very narrative. i like how gaara and hinata have two kids, eda sure sound more like his uncle kankuro! i tink karura can still be kazekage looking at gaara who was youngest and he became kazekage so i tink for karura it shudn't be a problem.