|Reviews for Secrets of Glory|
| Black Rabbit-san chapter 21 . 12/24/2016
Hey what's up? My brother just decided to re-watched PoT and I got sucked in his marathon and then I remember the fic that pushed me into making an account in this site just so I can add it in a fave list. I decided to read it from the start, which I have to say is good thinking on my part, since you completely changed it. All in a good way of course. Since I spent morning till night (no kidding) reading it all over again and I decided to let it all go in one review lest I forget a single thing I want to say.
I just want to say I think you re-hauling?(is that the right term?) it is a good idea. I think what I remember most of this fic was that Minori is always getting injured. Like after getting grounded by Akaya 2 chapters later she get injured or beat up again, Sylvie's over-the-top visit to to school, and the unlucky chapter 13 where Yukimura collapses. I mean that's how I remember it. I think your first edition was too fast-paced. Your changes are amazing. The pacing turned out really great, much more stronger foundation and you made every chapter count. The added content was amazing, especially the ones with Yukimura and Sylvie and the father. I really like Sylvie, is it weird I like her more than the main character?
About her playing style, I think I can imagine easier how she moves on the court with how you liken it to baseball and ice hockey. You didn't change the part though in the Ranking Match where she hit the ball then she immediately went to the spot where she knew the ball would go with Akaya thinking 'that's a stupid move' and yet the ball went her way and she manages to return it. Are you still thinking of putting reverse tezuka zone in the story or not cause I have to say that was one of my favorite in your fic
| UntiedHeartbeat chapter 2 . 8/15/2016
OMG O_O I LOVE HER. How can she be so calm after what he did ?! Best reaction EVER :D
| Arashi chapter 21 . 12/29/2015
I hope you will update more chapters, I really wanna read more~
| sayume214 chapter 21 . 8/16/2015
I had been wondering how Niou and Minori would ever get together with their dynamics. I'm very curious why he decided to start a relationship of sorts with her, and even more surprised she agreed. It's too early to judge if this move was bad or good, though it's certainly interesting.
I said it before and will again: I. Love. Ryo. I want my own.
| Fangirl chapter 20 . 8/2/2015
Andddd can we just comment on the fact that Akaya here is so in character and adorable?! I want a mini Akaya in my pocket! Will Akaya fall for Minori? o_o Idk why but even tho it's gonna be a NiouMinori fic but but but I kinda want AkayaMidori/RyoMidori/YukimuraMidori/HarumaMidori LOL Midori is so shippable (is that even a word?) Also! I wonder if you have intentions of pairing Chiaki with anyone? Like Akaya or Ryo :o or maybe even Sanada haha LOL
| Fangirl chapter 20 . 8/2/2015
Nice story XD It's really funny! I love this type of fanfiction, where there's more friendship and comedy stuff than romance. I love romance but not the type of love at first sight romance plot where many PoT fics have...AND your OCs are awesome! I srsly love every of your ocs, Ryo, Noriko, Chiaki, Toshio, Nana, Haruma, Noriko, Matsuo and especially Minori! I'm amazed I remembered all their names LOL I hope I didn't get any wrong...This is one of my most fav OC fanfics in PoT! This deserves more reviews! :O
Btw if anyone is interested in good PoT OC fanfics, I recommend 'Of Tennis and Ice Prince' and 'Someone like you'. I know the pain of not having a good fic to read soooo I'm like randomly recommending fics while reviewing LOL
| A Deathless Song chapter 20 . 5/31/2015
This story is great. It's well written, the plot is engaging and plausible, and the characterization is just phenomenal. I adore Minori and her entire family; they're all distinctive characters, and they mesh really well with the canon cast, who you manage to make pop off the page. You portray every member of the cast as individuals instead of static place holders, which is really refreshing by the way, and the chemistry between Minori and Niou is delicious - I love any scene where they cross wits and trade barbs. You write Niou as such a delightfully devious little bastard, and he really steals the show. And I love that Minori can hold her own against him, for the most part.
And Ryo. I just want to adopt Ryo, he's so precious. n_n
| greekfreak101 chapter 20 . 5/16/2015
Will this be a Niou/Minori? Please tell me it will be! I'm kinda shipping it really hard here! Btw, fantastic story! I cannot wait for more!
| iris chapter 20 . 5/10/2015
I cracked myse,of sensei~
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/9/2015
This is lovely, at first i shipped them and then i didnt because he was a jerk and then shipping allll over again!
| HarukaDiamond999 chapter 20 . 5/9/2015
Ryo was so adorable. I wonder how he'll react when he finds out about Minori!
And looking forward to more Niou and DATES! I wonder how they'll pull it off.
| Amberwish chapter 19 . 5/4/2015
don't leave me with that cliff hanger!
| Guest chapter 19 . 5/3/2015
OMG, I love it so much!
please update soon this is hilarious and amazin~
| sayume214 chapter 19 . 4/30/2015
Sometimes I just feel too lazy to login. :p You can send me a PM if I do that again while reviewing too. I'm pretty sure their Grand Slam games are a spectacle to behold. LOL.
I love the chapter's title.
Ooooh, what mischievous trap is Niou trying to set up for her now? I look forward to that. :3 It's bound to be funny and entertaining. Nice way to get the plot moving again. This chapter was not half bad, though. ;D
| Gemitri chapter 19 . 4/27/2015
Oh my goodness! I read this story when you first started it, and even though I hadn't thought about it in while, I remembered it and searched it. And I'm so glad I did! It's so nice to see new chapters, and I still love how you're writing out the plot. Keep it up!