Reviews for Glass
Mitzi1958 chapter 4 . 9/21/2014
I late in reading your story but what I am most intrigued with is you writing an outtake of Roselie and Alice going to town telling off the horrible Kate and I guess her sister or friend Tanya. I mean she had the nerve to tell her how sorry she is that Kate would not get the life she wanted with Garrett! Kate should have NEVER been with Garrett until he broke up with Bella. I mean FOR GODSAKES SHE WAS GOING TO MARRY THE MAN! Did she not have any morals at all.? I hope Bella gets a chance to really rip Kate a new asshole. A woman that would have an affair with another woman's man, one she was going to marry! Disgusting

Come on give us a knock down trashing month to Kate from Bella!

It will be hard for Bella to trust any man even Edward!
Darling Cullen chapter 10 . 5/25/2014
I don't want to sound like a critical b****** (mean girl) but some of your french translations are a bit awkward and not just right.

Bella: Good evening, Laurent. How have you been? (Bonsoir, Laurent. Comment avez-vous été)
Laurent: Very well, Bella. Thank you for agreeing to take over. (Très bien, Bella. Je vous remercie d'avoir accepté de prendre la relève)
Irina: Perhaps you know him, Bella. He is staring right at you. (Peut-être que vous le connaissez, Bella. Il vous regarde fixement/Il vous fixe du regard/ il a les yeux fixés sur vous)

I hope this would be helpful and once again I just wanted to help. I just also wanted to say I like what I read so far :)
robertsbella2 chapter 20 . 4/30/2014
Lovely story, enjoyed it so much.
robertsbella2 chapter 16 . 4/30/2014
Nice lemon.
robertsbella2 chapter 9 . 4/30/2014
Yeah she's going to see Edward again.
robertsbella2 chapter 5 . 4/30/2014
Enjoying your story, sad but I like the way they all met. Good advise by Rose.
SarcasticBimbo chapter 20 . 4/23/2014
GREAT story. I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks.
Chloe Masen chapter 4 . 3/15/2014
What a fucking prick. He's exactly where he belongs, in the dirt with the worms. And I think done is just fine.
Chloe Masen chapter 3 . 3/15/2014
He promised the whore a life, eh? I'm glad he's dead. Two points for karma.
Chloe Masen chapter 2 . 3/15/2014
Brother chaperones are definitely necessary. ;)
Chloe Masen chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Uniforms at the door are never good. :(
Debbie White chapter 20 . 2/11/2014
Great story! Thanks for writing! :)
My Friend Alice chapter 20 . 9/26/2013
Wonderful story!
KNG1986 chapter 19 . 9/10/2013
Lovely proposal.
KNG1986 chapter 16 . 9/10/2013
All heads out of asses. Nice. I love lemons and admire those that can write them, It's a gift.
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