Reviews for Umbrella
safera1997 chapter 1 . 2/5
I dont know if you'll see this or if you even care about this anymore but please please please update.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
I'm so upset that this only has one chapter. I need to read more. Needdddddd 3
Mage.of.the.Pen chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
I'm begging you, please write another chapter :)
Chapa'ai-hi chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
no. NO! NOOO! It can't just end there?! What are you doing to me? Please write a sequel, I BEG you!
mykeyo10 chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
WOW! THIS IS AMAZING! Holy crap! I can't wait for more, Hon this is magnificent!
Nikeroxx chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
OH MY GOD is there going to be an update?Please say yes!This is too fantastic not to continue!
The Carrot chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
I sit here in a glass bus stop, soaked to the bone myself, helplessly looking around for either a soaked archangel or a handy hunter with an umbrella. Sadly neither seem to be available so I'll have to suffer December rain by myself :( luckily this story was so wonderful it took my mind off the fact I think I missed said bus by two minutes. ;) great job
salatuh chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
This had a great tone. I wish this was not a one-shot, though. It would be great to work on ... the ending seemed slightly abrupt.