|Reviews for X men|
| WonderlandCrush chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Okay...I have little words for this fic: Long,very long,super long and good...this is only constructive critisisum aright? You should maybe breach this up a little I would probably class this as 3 or 4 pages. Because how long it is makes it hard to read. Okay I've done my part!
I like though so upload more but maybe a bit smaller,
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