|Reviews for The Man in the Long Black Coat|
| KimiD chapter 1 . 3/12
Whoa quite the first chapter, captivated from th every first... yeah, something about a man in a long black coat gets your attention!
| missmelly chapter 28 . 1/30
This is so incredibly good. So fresh and different and graphic novelesque. I see it all in pictures. It really should be illustrated.
| missmelly chapter 13 . 1/29
How'd I miss this way cool story? Thank you for badass Bella and thank you for writing for us.
| Lee Kyle chapter 15 . 1/23
Love the reference to thermodynamics!
Bella is a dark soul. Perhaps they are meant for each other...
| Y-knott chapter 28 . 1/12
Great chapter, I'm excited to see where this goes.
Thank you for sharing.
| Lee Kyle chapter 14 . 1/5
The more I think about it, the more I realize how pivotal the last chapter was. Edward is changing, daring to think and question and reconsider for the first time in so long. Nicely done.
Really excellent treatment of mind reading, and how it would skew a person's view of humanity. Every inclination of the thoughts of our hearts only evil all the time. Edward knows!
Jumping a month a bit confusing. Anything story-worthy happen in that month?
Bella and Alice. Thank you. This Edward has trouble written on him everywhere. Will that ever change?
13-14 are two great chapters. Well done!
| silver drip chapter 7 . 12/21/2013
As usual, good job.
| silver drip chapter 6 . 12/21/2013
Nice cliff hanger.
| silver drip chapter 5 . 12/21/2013
Two thumbs up.
| silver drip chapter 4 . 12/21/2013
Another good one.
| silver drip chapter 3 . 12/21/2013
| Lee Kyle chapter 13 . 12/4/2013
I'm glad she finally kissed him.
I understand why he likes her. Still uncertain why she likes him. Yes, he's the brooding, dangerous bad boy, etc. She just seems deep enough to want more than that.
| FinnMac chapter 14 . 12/2/2013
Why couldn't Edward have punched Jessica?
| FinnMac chapter 13 . 12/2/2013
Bella gave Mike Newton a beating? Cool.
| FinnMac chapter 12 . 11/30/2013
Guilt and teenagers don't mix.