Reviews for The Man in the Long Black Coat
Marliarna chapter 11 . 1/22
Superfriends? No. More like the X-men!
karen4honor chapter 36 . 2/25/2023
Snot-sobbing, but what a rush of a story! Thank you!
karen4honor chapter 16 . 2/24/2023
OMGOSH! Charlie NEVER disappoints!
TrillionSchiffer chapter 36 . 12/5/2022
Wow, that was...different, in a good way of course.

Edward is a Vampire, with emotional issues. aka an a-hole. Bella is a maladjusted human aka a girl with anger problems.

Vampires move on the world and attempt to take it over. The Cullens are killed, and Charlie becomes a vampire. Charlie, Bella and Edward lead what is left of humans and vampires against the 'Brazillian' ...

(A really dumb name for the antagonist btw... I couldn't help but think about a properly shaved and waxed Vag every time I heard his name. Took all the menace right out of the story. LMAO)

who amassed an army to conqueror the world, and almost accomplishes it.

Bella has a great power but can't access it, till Edward sacrifices himself in order for her to get reach the anger she needs to do what needed to be done.

Shame she didn't 'TRAIN' and 'LEARN' how to access it. Or that Jasper didn't survive and make her feel the anger she needed. SMH But I guess the Author wanted tragedy and that's what we got.

No happy endings here. No HEA. Just misery unending. Bella is mate less... But hey, a bunch of worthless backstabbing humans got to live in exchange. Good Trade!
Craving2Read chapter 35 . 2/27/2022
Wow. How did I not find your stories sooner while WIP, I don't know. Finally, someone not afraid to be real and allow the main characters to be written off/killed. Nicely done!
rjh1960 chapter 10 . 1/12/2022
Love this story. Bella is great, what a badass!
Elisabeth123 chapter 36 . 11/2/2021
O gosh you killed Edward? WHHHHHHYYYYYY?
Nehacullenwinx chapter 36 . 5/25/2021
I really cried when It actually hit me that u really killed edward i mean whyyy the story was really good that it made me cry ️coz i cant imagine edward and bella without each other and i thought it will be a happy ending but i guess not everyone gets a happy ending.
Thanks for the storyy though️
Blind Wish chapter 36 . 3/24/2021
Amazing story, very different and with great twist.
HappyEndingLover chapter 36 . 12/21/2020
Very different story! Really like how many different turns it took.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 15 . 9/19/2020
What! Not Charlie. Wipe that ides.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 11 . 9/19/2020
Oooo, was it James that turned Edward?
TwiTwiAgain chapter 9 . 9/19/2020
Ha! And I thought the Cullens wouldn’t be in this.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 6 . 9/18/2020
Love this story.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 4 . 9/18/2020
Me too, Edward.
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