Reviews for The Man in the Long Black Coat
BridieM chapter 12 . 3/26/2015
Intense chapter indeed. Also, FYI, canon vamps don't leave fingerprints or DNA. Doesn't bother me I go with the flow.
BridieM chapter 11 . 3/26/2015
Well it is only fair that you barely have control over Bella 'cause edward certainly doesn't. Love it. The man doesn't know when to admit defeat.
BridieM chapter 10 . 3/26/2015
Love that this story takes me in directions I' don't suspect.
BridieM chapter 9 . 3/26/2015
Most unexpected thiat was. Liked it a lot.
Guest chapter 36 . 3/26/2015
FUUUUUCCKKIK YOU FORR KILLING EDWARD!
BridieM chapter 8 . 3/26/2015
I don't mind you changing canon vamps. It's been done before. Another compelling read.
BridieM chapter 7 . 3/26/2015
Wow.
BridieM chapter 6 . 3/26/2015
Fascinating read.
dollydimple chapter 36 . 3/26/2015
I really loved this story, so well written. I look forward to your next endeavour.
ohsugarhoney chapter 16 . 3/26/2015
hahaha oh my god with a dramatic flair. totally pictured it
BridieM chapter 5 . 3/25/2015
This is a fascinating read.
BridieM chapter 4 . 3/25/2015
Excellent chapter.
roxiegirl chapter 36 . 3/25/2015
I thought the ending fit the story very well. Feel bad that Bella is all alone, but she's a superhero! Loved her going back to the convenience store!
roxiegirl chapter 35 . 3/25/2015
Well damn. I didn't see that coming at all! But go Bella go!
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 35 . 3/25/2015
Nòoooooooo
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