This is adorable. I love how you molded the song lyrics so that it was still in-character and fit with the setting. Excellent work.

Loved it. I am just discovering your wonderful stories. Matthew and Mary live in fan fiction. I am very grateful for that. Great work.

i thought this would be cheesy but t brilliant! you got their characters right and most importantly you didnt make them actually singing so that good

That was lovely :)

I hear Ella Fitzgerald and Louis Armstrong in my head when I hear this song - so that is a strange mix up when I think of M&M but this was an adorable idea!

I...I... I can't stop smiling. That was fantastic, Thank you for continuously providing us with more Matthew and Mary.

Matthew sure won't give up here. Not exactly like him but very fun!

I was singing the song the whole time I was reading this hahahaha Great story

Oh that was terribly cute and a great use of the song! Thank you!

Hey!
I must have missed this on tumblr. Boy did I need cheering up, and this was so cute! :') albeit very random :P
xxx

Well, this is just what I needed! :D M/M being sweet, flirty, playful and just delightful. :) And what a clever idea to have them unknowingly "act out" the song! I SO loved the dancing, and just the closeness - Matthew's gentle protectiveness of Mary, which you always depict so well. An absolute delight - I will think of them when I hear this song from now on! :) Keep writing! :D

That was such a sweet one-shot.
Maureen

Found myself singing this song while Christmas shopping this morning. Love the song, love the story. Only wish Matthew had persuaded her to stay over. How could she refuse him?

I have been waiting for someone to write a M/M fanfic with this song. Thankyou wonderful person! :)

I read this on your blog yesterday and I thought it was very clever. And sweet. And hot. ;-)