|Reviews for Lord Perseus Child of Rome|
| the Bass Beast chapter 23 . 2/14
I know this story is over, but I just wanted to tell you how much I absolutely love your story. I was captivated by it from the second or third chapter. This is one of the best fics I have ever read, in this fandom or any other. The story was funny and cute, but still meaningful, being about sacrifice and doing what's right. Did I mention it was cute because oh my gods in the epilouge those girls were just TOO CUTE! Percy and Zoë had two daughters! Were they twins or not? And Poseidon with Athena. I had my suspicions, but it was still relatively surprising. While we're on the topic of relationships, I've never really liked Luke and Annabeth, but I mean it's your story. I'm fine with Thalia and Nico, but that's probably partly because Nico is like my favorite character and there are only a few people that I am upset seeing with him. When I was reading the part about Jason's confused and pained expressions when everyone is explaining things to him, I burst out laughing. I don't know why I found it so funny, but I did. Your battle scenes were excellent and your relationship-building scenes were just as good. I liked the new Olympian Council you put together. I was a bit surprised, but I agree with every one of your choices. I also really enjoyed the scene with Lupa and Chaos in the first chapter. I also thought that Zeus's new role as god of drama and theater was well deserved. My favorite part of the story, though, was the underlying message that you can start with nothing and through good choices, love and care, and acceptance and forgiveness for others, end up with everything. I admire your storytelling skills and will definitely be sure to check out your other stories. See you around! ~Bass Beast
| Invoke Thy Name chapter 3 . 2/14
I really love your attitude in these author notes, it reminds me of when I hang out with my friends. Rock on
| Death Fury chapter 23 . 2/3
loved the story!
| jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 1/27
Muy buena n
| EthanNyaumah chapter 14 . 1/14
| Bryan Prynce chapter 23 . 12/23/2016
your stories are all epics
| indra uzumaki chapter 11 . 12/19/2016
You're have have right No teenger knows romantic love that what I hate about most The fics "we fallen in our teen or preteen or even children years" WTF MAN but we can love stuff like Video game PC's programs stuff not people all in all thank for make it real.
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/30/2016
did you not see the power of a primordial God in the house of Hades i like the story but it is annoying when you make someone more powerful than he actually is
| UnfortunateReader chapter 23 . 11/27/2016
U get a 9/10. I enjoyed this a lot.
Well done. Not much I can say that really blares "amazing writing", but you did a good job with what you had.
| Nobody659 chapter 23 . 11/25/2016
That story was great! Made me feel all nice and happy
| PoseidonPrince chapter 23 . 11/23/2016
| Cerulean Night chapter 23 . 11/9/2016
excellent story. not read the percy bòoks but you made it easy enough to pick up any needed details.
| I need to sleep chapter 23 . 11/9/2016
It's 1:32AM I need to get a life ;-;
| LoveGoodBooks chapter 23 . 11/1/2016
Hi, just wanted to say thanks for a great read n finishing your story, unlike so many others. Keep up the great writing! :)
| PwnerofHeroes chapter 7 . 10/23/2016
definitley enjoying this how can both percy and erebus be the primordial god of darkness