Reviews for Lord Perseus Child of Rome
Guest chapter 21 . 8/6
Aether and hemera should also be in this primordial war
Guest chapter 22 . 8/6
Why the beep is nico on the council
Guest chapter 18 . 8/6
Plz stop pda I like perzoe fluff but not pda ok
Guest chapter 14 . 7/15
Love AU stories good job but you really made Thalia clasrrise immortal it's fine though keep up the good work I've never met an author who puts so much time in fan fiction
Guest chapter 11 . 7/15
Nice chap boi
Guest chapter 4 . 7/15
Geez long an? I just skip it very long more story less an ya bad
Harabe chapter 2 . 7/15
You know Erebus is the primordial of darknesss so in this chronos has faded I guess (not Kronos) I guess hunting and battle are good domains good work
Shadow-Fire Dragon Slayer chapter 23 . 7/4
just finished for the 3rd time and it never gets old. this a fantastic I wish there was a sequel
GoodOldInstinct chapter 23 . 6/26
Just finished, i couldnt stop reading, have to ask though did God of Night get a title change or did it ger removed? was looking forward to reading it
DracoErebos chapter 23 . 6/13
5th time reading it, First time reviewing. Gotta say, the Perzoe shipping had never occured to me because it seemed to be so impossible, to the point that it never occurred to me as a possible shipping in a fanfiction. However, you managed to write it so well, so damn, nice work dude. Also, in chapter 22, when Perseus was fighting Ares, he bit out chunks of Ares' flesh in his wolf form, and Zoe kissed him right after... SO SHE KISSED HIM WHILE HE HAD ARES' FLESH IN HIS MOUTH. EW. Other than that, gotta say this is in my top 3 fanfictions list :D Hope to see more of your stories soon!
stonedbob chapter 11 . 6/10
reading this chapter now it's nice to see how far you've come as a writer, the detail you have developed you have developed in your fight scenes particularly, but the fight is good nevertheless
Tommybobberson chapter 17 . 6/8
Nice but I don't really like clarrise's character
Tommybobberson chapter 10 . 6/8
Nice seeing Artemis in the mix but just wanna say cuz I read altered destinies before maybe you could change up the spot a little so it doesn't get too boring
Tommybobberson chapter 3 . 6/8
Okay I'd like to say even though it's your first story it is amazing and I like the way you
Introduce your characters so keep writing
R0JA2017 chapter 23 . 6/5
this was a very entertaining and original story.
keep it up.
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