people still want more even though it ain't gonna happen l smug face l

aweee I want more lmao please continue this

Yes it is

Creat more please

this is just according to my reading preferences so take it with a grain of salt, but i always find that written fanfiction like these arent suited for very long fight sequences and its really hard to pay attention and reimagine the entire thing as you read. definitely not impossible, but the story's been great so far and i had to point this one out

I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

nah fucking lost with that dumb shit. just make a op motherfucker god i hate stupid drama shit.

Is this ENTIRE STORY one long narrative?

man, I wish there was more

While I realize this story will never be finished, I have to say its been a great story. The little tid bits of foreshadowing show alot of thought and planning had gone into its creation and I feel this would have been an epic story.
Thank You

The switching between Naruto's first person POV to a general third person POV is kinda shoddy

pls updoot

this... is dumb. killed it for me.
Yeah, not interested.

MC, having mastered Fuinjutsu, ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and maybe kenjutsu... should puit some effort into learning something new with this new chance. Like learning iryojutsu. Maybe figure out how to be immortal. Or those Hashirama cells for regeneration.

I don't understand how "Chakra Control" works. The lower it is the better it is ? Or inverse ?