Reviews for Fifteen
nat1794 chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Okay, so I'm loving all this little one shots every day ( yeah, I know I'm a sucky reviewer) but surely you are braking your mould here? This can't be complete? Day 12 is the next morning? Or even the continuing scene from the beach once Bella left?

Please tell me you are continuing this?
SparklingFae chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
I already love it! Can't wait to see where you go with this! :D
twimama77 chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Person Of A Strange Origin chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Is that all? Is it complete? Please say no! There's so much left unsaid and it's beautiful and I want more so bad, please? Oh, please? T_T
geenakmom chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Wow! Imprinting sure causes clusterfucks. This one effects 4 people Bella, Seth, Ed and Jake.
I feel for Seth because he didn't do anything on purpose. Would love to see his side to this! (Hint hint). Jake even pissed should realize this.
Bella I'm not sure how I feel about her. She wants to run and bury her head in the sand. I know the girls Emily, Sue and Leah, are trying to explain and reason with her about imprinting. So not to be a murderer she ends it with Eds. Really sad. But the whole thing is.
I do give props to Leah for sticking it to Emily. Even poor Sue us effected by this.
Lolabean07 chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
I definitely liked Sue and Leah in this story. Bella, eh, not so much. I understand that she's been blindsided by all of this but to still love Edward and want to make that choice. She only chose Seth because she didn't want to be a murderer but what did she think might happen when she was a newborn? Isn't there a possibility that she could end up attacking one, two, or a dozen humans before getting control?
Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Oh i am so sad now. It's for the best for Bella and Seth though and stops the vampire stuff and Jacob owning her stuff. Now Bella can go to college and graduate with a guy just growing up waiting for her.
darkjewels chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Loved it and I really want to know what happens next. Please add to it!
mycajunlover chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
I want more.
BriyerRose chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
I would love to see how this story would go! Please think about continuing this?
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
oh wow this was a good first chapter also who knew that Edward would let Bella go cause of her soul mate and just so she can be happy well try to and hopefully those two can be friends later on but i doubt it. At least Edward said bye to her this time round and that is a good thing right. Hope things work out for everyone that is involved. Thank you and have a good week.
Caitie126 chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
I really think you should continue this one! I would want to see how the relationship worked out between the two.
Deedlez01 chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Ooh I love this one! I've really been trying to find a descent Seth/Bella story. If you want to continue this one I wouldn't be disappointed.
sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
aww that was so emotional poor bella thats so story
xXxAngel-With-A-ShotgunxXx chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
This one was ... strange. A little dark, but still really good. Could you write another imprinting one shot?
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