Reviews for The King E
Matthew42 chapter 9 . 4/1/2013
a fitting ending, I also love the part were he says: don't worry, she's just saying shit for money... that was priceless XD
Matthew42 chapter 8 . 3/15/2013
pretty good chapter, keep it up
Matthew42 chapter 7 . 2/12/2013
pretty good, but the cutting off of the evil mans penis was a little far...
you could have a sublinal message implying that he's referring to that body part like: your junk, or something like that...
also this is just a thougt... why have one ending?
you can make one that official and a few other alternet ones or just a few (4/5 ) endings and leave the readers to guess which one is the real ending...
Matthew42 chapter 6 . 2/7/2013
creepy, but good. keep it up!
Matthew42 chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
damn, shoulda read it sooner, that was pretty good... epsecaly the part were he confronted the doctor...
way to go E
Matthew42 chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
also I recmoend that instead of them killing lucy, they are about to kill her when god intervenes, saying he should not harm a innocent soul, (aka he shows them her life, and all its trauma) and instead of killing her gods takes in lucy to help her "find her place" basicly it shows that she is not completely evil nor can you stop evil with evil, and E is not Evil (E-vil) E is Emazeingly good (amazeingly good, but you get the idea)
Matthew42 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
hello, i find this story kind of intresting... the description iof god was pretty good.
although if i wrote this i would not have had him flat out say it but more liek hint it...
anyways a like your story, its very diffrent from what i nomraly read and im looking forward to see were it go's