Reviews for Necessary Contact
donstehly2 chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
This story is cute on the surface, but I find some of the dialogue to be subtly chilling. Sif has been molested and Frigga gives her a prettied up 'Boys will be boys' and 'That's just how he is you can't blame him' speech. She tells Sif to make amends to Fandral. Amends. To apologize for getting upset with him after he betrayed her trust and made her feel so ashamed that she was driven to tears. And Sif agreed with her.

It's a terrifying example of prejudice against women and blaming the victim. And Sif doesn't even realize it. Despite how she fights to break free of female stereotypes, she can't recognize that she has accepted this dangerous sort of mentality. And I can see how that could really piss Loki off. Anger him enough to break off this fragile thing between them. Because she doesn't get that Fandral was wrong to do what he did. That she was allowed to be angry and betrayed and hurt. That forgiveness shouldn't be so easily given without atonement.
NatashaAndTheBoys chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
Please update! I really like sifxloki as a pairing and would love to see how you develop it!
Wonderstruck Pen chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
This is really well-written! Keep writing!
Ghost Rider of the Aragon chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
Nice work! I love how you write Loki/Sif. You have got me shipping them now...oh dear...more stories to write, so little time...
Fandral's punishment at Loki's hands feels very similar to what happened to Rabadash at the end of C.S. Lewis' "The Horse and His Boy"
AGriffinWriter chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
I love it! So sweet! :)
BrightWatcher chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
Ooooh... Loki and Sif are axing together.

You made them very natural and right with each other.

Good luck with your writer's muse!
Blue-Starlight92 chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Awww! This is so sweet, I love it!
Blerb chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
I've never really liked Loki/Sif pairings, they never really seem to click, but this story was perfect. (: Now I must run off and find more Loki/Sif stories. XD
Faye M.A chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
What a lovely little piece! I quite admire your writing style; you voiced the characters very accurately and presented details at apt moments. It's so nice to find a piece like this that is well-written and in character. It made me smile and was a pleasure to read. Thank you for writing!
murdur chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
This is very very cute!
Belief Among Unrest chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
One word: dayum.
The Lord of Insomnia chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
awwwwwww i loved that!
Scarlet Silverweaver chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I really liked the contrast between the way Thor led and the way Loki led. It was amazingly telling of their personalities. :)

Sorry, being a dancer myself, I just couldn't help saying that.
domilue chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
What a great story. Your characterizations of everyone are terrific and the story itself was beautifully told. I hope you write more of Sif/Loki furthering their relationship.
Navy Babe chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Smitten young Loki is just the sweetest. At first I was a little bit confused by Sif's actions, but they way you described it helped clarify a lot - of course she would feel betrayed by Fandral treating her like a conquest when she's worked so hard to become an equal. I love that Loki and Sif didn't speak to each other in the garden, but it was exactly what she needed. And Frigga is just the best. :). Very sweet story!
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