|Reviews for Shattered Silence|
| Edward0Elric chapter 3 . 3/7/2014
Update soon please!
| ChucklingDevil chapter 3 . 2/20/2014
It's almost sinful with just how well you've written this story.
You use English very well in order to convey your story and keep the plot interesting.
It's really saddening to see that there isn't more to read. I really want to know where you were planning on going with this.
- Would a relationship bloom? (Gods, please)
- How ate they going to actually release the NightMares?
- How is Jack planning on helping Pitch in the meantime?
- Why would the guardians react so violently and how will they continue to treat Jack further on?
There are just too many possibilities and I really do wish there was more to read.
| katrina silverwood chapter 3 . 8/27/2013
More please! Love it and neeeed more
| thenormalfreak chapter 3 . 8/14/2013
yep, as i thought...loving it, i was a bit iffy about the 'mentions of rape' you spoke of, but it was nothing to bad in my books. i must admit, im very much liking this fic, i do hope you'll carry on.
| R. E'lisa M chapter 3 . 7/12/2013
| Sumi-Sprite chapter 3 . 6/3/2013
Dude, BEST RotG fic EVER.
I cannot wait to see more! I hope you still continue to write this - I absolutely LOVE your blackice Tumblr too! So much neat stuff on it, and you and your co-mun are awesome. And your writing style is just so lovely, I'm so jealous!
I hope you update soon! Much love!
| Forestgirl99 chapter 3 . 5/17/2013
I LOVE IT please write the next part i can't wait
| iJoeyMonster chapter 3 . 5/14/2013
Oh Jack, you're in too deep already.
| TheSpirit chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
This is a really good story! Hope to see you update soon! 3
| justAfool chapter 3 . 3/31/2013
please update D: It's reeeeeally good!
| Linaceae chapter 2 . 3/27/2013
It's so freakin' cool when Jack is angry !
I like so much when he doesn't even notice that he makes snow or storm..!
Ouch North... It's so uncool...
And Sandy... :'(
Why are you making nice Sandy go so nasty ?
But hey... On the other hand, it got us a beautiful caring Pitch :D
Well, at least for... Some times '
But it still sound so natural here, it's not so much forced I find.
And then, there is lovely teasing, hot Pitch... Wahou...
The way he play with Jack... Is he really just using him or it's just for the fear ?
And now : go to the next chapter !
| Linaceae chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Seriously, I like this beginning :D
Pitch is quite miserable, but you mannage to not make him... pathetic.
And well... With this begining, I feared Jack would exasperate me because of he's "innocence", but infact, he's just naive enough to be credible. (it sound not as much of a compliment, but I really wanted to prize you here :S)
I like the idea of the change of look which shows the change in Jack. How he became more like a Guardian.
Will he loose them when he'll decide to be with Pitch ? (if he decide)
Also, I really like the hestitation of Pitch. Of course he have some moral ! Plenty, I'm sure !
But it's so irresistible to see him not want to hurt Jack... :D
More of kisses !
| HeartxSoul chapter 3 . 3/25/2013
Please update soon! I'm loving the story :D
| haruhilover14 chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
Absolutely beautiful. Is Jack going to give into to Pitch? How long before the other guardians discover Jack's complete betrayal? Although it doesn't really seem like Jack betrayed them because they don't care that Pitch is going to die. Please continue this, and upstate very fast!
| Emptydarkneification chapter 3 . 3/16/2013
Ah geeze making me feel all warm and fuzzy, with that dangerous undertone... keep it coming!