Reviews for The Night of the Unexpected Visit
SilverShadow44 chapter 18 . 11/26/2017
SilverShadow44 chapter 17 . 11/26/2017
That's right, Loveless!
Call Jim a do-gooder! It's nearly as good an insult word as execrable!
Who did you take vocabulary lessons from - Priscilla Ames?
SilverShadow44 chapter 13 . 11/25/2017
Cleaning up after pets, Loveless!
That includes hairballs, litterboxes and midnight surprises!
SilverShadow44 chapter 9 . 11/21/2017
I knew there had to be some reason after all this time that Loveless wasn't bothering to check Jim's boot heels . . . .

This is one of the parts where we freeze frame and go to commercial, isn't it?
SilverShadow44 chapter 8 . 11/21/2017
Yep, definitely a Gordon . . . .
SilverShadow44 chapter 7 . 11/21/2017
No, Denise! Don't do it!
That train gets broken into more often than a refrigerator during the Superbowl!
SilverShadow44 chapter 6 . 11/21/2017
And then, Loveless, and then you must be subjected to the horrors of cleaning up after pets!

Keep driving him nuts, Jim and Missie!
SilverShadow44 chapter 5 . 11/21/2017
Moronic minions! Never, never, NEVER assume the hero is dead until you have the actual body in hand!

Go, Arte!
SilverShadow44 chapter 4 . 11/21/2017
This isn't nearly enough suffering! Loveless must be made to teach required core courses!
SilverShadow44 chapter 2 . 11/21/2017
OK, Loveless DEFINITELY needs to be made to suffer for this one!
Neshomeleh chapter 18 . 1/20/2013
lol, I love the last part of this;)
Diddlepie chapter 18 . 1/20/2013
Drossel /Vogel: interesting character. I wonder if we'll see him again. Perhaps he is a bad guy in waiting? Curious. I like the idea of a foreign spy... it's a new dimension. Anyway, I digress. Time- flies is a great story. Love your dialogue. Thanks for the fun ride.
Deana chapter 18 . 1/20/2013
LOL, funny ending to a great story!
cmee57 chapter 15 . 1/16/2013
Hah! a Yo-yo makes an effective weapon. Loved it!
cmee57 chapter 14 . 1/16/2013
What a scary ride for Artie under that wagon!
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