|Reviews for Daylight's Embrace|
| rrazzall chapter 37 . 1/30
owwsum and very well done! keep up the great work!
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/3/2013
I like age differance fics too :) one of my favourite pairings in the HP fandom is Hermerva (hermione/minerva)...roughly a 50 year differance in age...but witches age differantly ;)
| Guest chapter 37 . 7/30/2013
yay nice ending.
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/3/2013
Bella had a miscarraige?
Marissa was stillborn?
Marissa suffered 'sudden Infant death syndrome' (cot death)?
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/3/2013
I really hate the term 'stutter'...its more pc to call it a 'STAMMER'...I've been fighting to overcome mine for years and it REALLY annoys me when people make little of it ..or call it a stutter (although like Alice mine only appears when Im nervous, anxious...or around the lassie I like)
| NANA100 chapter 37 . 3/24/2013
ok this story was sad infuriating, comforting, and all around awsom. i have to admit i started laupghing knowing the baby was not james. but i do have one question is alices baby going to be a boy or girl and what happened to anggi and rose sorry that was two questions
| ray-ber chapter 35 . 3/9/2013
You obviously don't realise this but youv just written an original, change the names and no one would associate this story with twilight and im enjoying this story so dont worry
| samaramorgane chapter 37 . 3/5/2013
That was good as always! :)
| Kalla Kalia chapter 37 . 3/5/2013
AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW Alice and Bella are gonna have a baby! ;p
| secrets87 chapter 37 . 3/4/2013
:) Ali is pregnant! Omg! How old are Slice and Bella know? Great epilogue Hun.
| SOS9494 chapter 37 . 3/4/2013
| Vampgirl79 chapter 37 . 3/4/2013
Hi bb! Wow, sorry it took me a bit to review this. I had a busy weekend, lol. So did you apparently with all these chapters! I have to say that reader had a great idea. I had thought of it too, wondering if you had planned on doing an epilogue. I am so glad you did! It was wonderful to get a glimpse into the girls future years later. Oh sweety this was such a beautiful, perfect chapter that tied up more loose ends and it was the perfect ending! Thank you so much for writing this ;) It was great to get a peek of Edward with Nessie, her being a little girl now and there exchange with Bella and Alice was nice. And oh my gosh Alice is preg! Thats awesome, I thought it was a great idea that they got a sperm donor to help Alice concieve. I am so glad for them. They will be amazing, beautiful parents! How great too that Alice finished college and has her teaching degree. I really loved reading about their visit with Carlisle and Esme. So it sounds like due to all the luggage they brought, maybe they might move back? That would be neat. But Bella seems to love her new job too. Oh how cute Esme and Carlisle named their kid Riley, haa. I enjoyed the whole dinner scene. I was relieved to read that Carlisle is okay with Alice and Bella together and is accepting of it. He took the pregnancy news well too :) The girls need all the support they can get. I thought it was cute and funny too Ali and Bella bickering. Bella is being so protective and loving to Ali, making sure she is well taken care of. I can understand why Bella is being this way. Alice sees it as overprotecting and smothering, but thats normal, most pregnant women feel that way when people hover over them, haa. I just thought it was adorable. I loved too how Bella gave Ali a foot rub, then took care of her, to help her relax, hee. Hot times indeed! I am so happy that Bella and Alice are happy, they are still going strong and they love each other now more than ever. Just so, so sweet! This was perfect, thank you so much! I will miss this story a lot :( ttys, xoxoxo
| ScOut4It chapter 37 . 3/4/2013
I am glad for the epilogue, it needed it. The epilogue was also pretty lovely.
Thanks for the story :)
| ScOut4It chapter 34 . 3/4/2013
A silver lining
| ScOut4It chapter 33 . 3/4/2013
Oh damn lol! I was amazed by the dramatic entrance of Vicky again, but nice twist. And yeah, Bella really can't get a relaxing day, can she? A double-date with her therapist and ex-girlfriend, a lawn argument/tug-o-war with her girlfriend and girlfriend's father, an ex-husbands current girlfriend and the unborn baby that Bella envies, damage to her property, damage to her carpet, and more babies all around her being born and newly conceived. Now, the twist can at least give her some satisfaction that between that and her sexy almost-jail-bait girlfriend, her life doesn't completely blow.