Reviews for I Can't Face The Dark Without You
Lauren chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
I love you choice of title. Really good song, I love BB
Dex chapter 11 . 7/18/2013
Pretty good so far, but I think you should have chosen one style or the other. It's too long and detailed to read like a journal entry and your attempts to make it sound like one come off as a little jarring. Another issue I had was the time jumps between the POVs of Daryl and Shan. If you're going to write two characters in one chapter I think you would have been better off writing them both in third person. Overall though I think it's interesting and your characterization and details on his backstory are good.
Leigh chapter 37 . 7/16/2013
So sad. I loved every minute of this. Please continue your efforts, you have real talent! Thanks for the story, definitely helped curb my TWD craving. Really great job.
Guest chapter 37 . 6/16/2013
you are an amazing writer. i love how even though the ending is so depressing, its different and its realistic, and it made me feel horrible and thats what makes it so good. all these stories have happy endings, but in the world of the walking dead, thats fake. so i applaud you for 1. being an amazing writer and 2. not ruining the reality of the walking dead, but instead making it much more interesting though depressing.
Guest chapter 37 . 6/14/2013
Wow really loved this story I love that its seems more real then most of those sappy fairytales people post on here. I can't wait for the sequel I know its already posted but I always wait for at least 10 chapters before i read any story
crazychicalol chapter 37 . 6/14/2013
I loved this story but the ending was so sad and hard for me to read. I just can't believe you killed her off.
aaaXobsessed chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Wow you rock! I really can't wait to finish this. Shan would be an awesome addition to the cast. And I just absolutely looove love love Daryl Dixon.
I also wanted to tell that when it gets to the real part of the story after she wakes up, the last 3 sentences on the 10th line you leave 1st person and go into 3rd. It doesn't seem like you meant for that so you should change that. Again I love your story!
SeverusSnape'sLove chapter 37 . 6/9/2013
No, that's terrible. Poor Daryl. :'(
xmenfan33 chapter 37 . 6/8/2013
Aww how sad :( I can't wait for the next book :)
jessegdixon chapter 37 . 6/7/2013
Awww Daryl! He's so sad, I hate seeing him in pain he makes your heart shatter into a million pieces... this story has been sad from the very beginning it messes with your feels lol. It's hard to find stories tht keep twd's dark tone and this one might just go a little darker I love it! Can't wait till the sequel!
hayleyjune13 chapter 37 . 6/7/2013
Paper Grenade chapter 37 . 6/7/2013
Love how you ended this, despite the fact that they're separated again, and I can't wait for the sequel. May I get the link for that, please?
Riain chapter 37 . 6/7/2013
I really loved this story. It was a nice change of pace from the usual stuff out there. I would love to see the next part of the story. I have to find out what happened with Shan! Great work!
ObjectiveObserverFromAfar chapter 37 . 6/7/2013
Oh. My. Gosh. I cried that through the whole epilogue. I discovered this story very late in the game but I loved it. Shan was an amazing character and the whole story just...yay you. *Applause*

Now...I just can't wait for the sequel. Congrats on some amazing work here :)
mrskaz453 chapter 37 . 6/7/2013
OMG... He thinks that she's dead...NO...

This was so sad... heartbreaking... You had me crying for the last two chapters...

I can't wait to read the "You Are The Wilderness". Please send me the link...

This story is just awesome... There were times that I wanted to strangle a few of the characters... some more than others as you know and I admit that I'm a bit scared now that Daryl thinks she's gone...but I trust you to write a great story so I'm really for the next part...

Awesome story...can't wait for the next one...
176 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »