Reviews for Slowing Down |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I think I can sorta-kinda go with this idea. Heck of a lot better than the other ideas out there. Haha! Either way, cute little story. Thanks for posting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really loves this idea where its so rare and beautiful~ sweet moment between Jack n Tooth. lovely! Thanks for the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool idea for a story. I loved reading it and hope to read more stories from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe! This story gave me some delightfully warm fuzzies! So thanks for that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! i like the way you make tooth can change to her human form if she needed and thats what make this story interesting i wish she can do that in real story too i need more frostbite from you even its been 2 years the story had passed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Feeding the fire? Hmmm... as a hardcore (but fairly new) Frostbite shipper I found this both adorable and I can see her more human form being... of use :) I hope you don't mind if it makes it into a story or two of my own in future. I'm happy to credit you as I think you have come up with a great idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do 'dig'! This is so fluffy! I love it! Such a nice read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed so hard at the line "I believe a young man whom I once came across during my time called this particular look a 'smolder'." LOL FLYNN RYDER. The ending had me squealing! This was too cute! EEE! x3 I really liked the idea though, about her changing form. That's so creative. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I dig. I dig very much so. This is very well-written and I love the idea and oh my goodness-I really don't know what to say. I approve of this. (Except you really don't need my approval for anything because you're an amazing writer as it is.) Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() zxfhsdfjahsgkflañ THISS IS PERFECTIONNNNNNN sjdnad oh god i love it i just love it it was so perfectand ugh i cant take all my feellssssshbs,fsjbajsd a |
![]() ![]() ![]() you should make it more than a one shot :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nicely done, here! short and sweet but nothing rushed. :) love how you described tooth's process of molting in a rationally realistic manner. gotta love the invitation to bed XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it ! |
![]() ![]() AHH i love the refrence!SMOLDER! hehe... corny is fine kinda cool youd think up something like that |