Reviews for Jealousy
BarbaraKaterina chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Oh, I love this! I've always thought that both Kirk accepting the admiralty and Spock attempting the kolinahr was pretty absurd, and I'm thrilled by your explanation. I have my own theory about Spock (it's going to appear in Gradually Falling in a couple of chapters), but I always just assumed Kirk didn't know what he wanted. This explanation makes so much sense...
demonwithaglasshand chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
I applaud your McCoy. You have him down to a tee.
angym chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Good
murphycat chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Different perspective, I like the "fixing" you worked in there. Do I hear some regional accent there? 'Cause I am 'a fixin' to write on my story later. :)