Reviews for Lily Evans, Chaser
emie the bookworm chapter 20 . 11/30/2023
This was so funny and so sweet! Like 90 percent of the fic gave me second hand embarrassment but it was genuinely so heartwarming and lovely to read this. I was pleasantly surprised by your characterizations of all of Lily's friends- the bonds of female friendship were sketched very well. I liked the way you made Daisy Abbott seem mature and self-possessed and didn't just make her a shrieking bitch just for the sake of the plot. Absolutely loved it!
Fayejase chapter 20 . 9/1/2022
This chapter. James. Perfection. He’s perfect. I want a clone of him for myself
Fayejase chapter 11 . 9/1/2022
This story… is awesome. One of a kind. Totally just mind boggling. Massive smile inducing. Just ugh. Perfection.
Fayejase chapter 5 . 8/31/2022
Peru? Fucking hilarious omg
The Jingo chapter 2 . 7/14/2022
Based James

Plenty of fish in the sea brother
SonntagMorgen27 chapter 20 . 3/4/2022
This was just beautiful!
Thank you so much for your great ideas! I enjoyed your character development a lot!
Nice writing style and good entertainment in general. It was quite funny at some parts!
Ich live this James so much! He really has got a different aspect which you have shown us very nicely in this story!
Thanks a lot!
Jhesnyder chapter 20 . 1/11/2022
I never comment. Ever. But you, my friend, have truly created a work of art. It was funny, it had depth, and it flowed PERFECTLY. Thank you for not dragging it all out…Lord knows there are plenty of Fics that do that.

Seriously though, you should be proud. I actually teared up (who would have thought…not me) Cheers to this story and you, the author. Keep doing your thing.
lockmyhart chapter 20 . 10/11/2021
I finished this at 4:30 in the morning and frankly I can't believe I didn't wake my entire family from the insane amount of giggling and snorting this fic had me doing.

Because ~ wow ~ this entire thing was hilarious (in the best way).

I literally can only think of one criticism and that's to James himself: if you put your self-worth in someone else's opinion of you, *that's* on you. If you continue to ask someone out 137 times, and they're nasty back and they "crush" you, that's kinda deserved.
Katy chapter 20 . 6/19/2021
OH MY GOSH this was really one of the best Lily fics I’ve ever read wow u are soooooo sooooo talented! James Proposal to Lily was sooo beautiful and heartfelt like my heart was beating fast for Lily. I’m glad that Lily never gave up and didn’t like her pride get in the way of a good thing. I’m glad James gave her a chance and not missed out on a beautiful relationship. I’m glad Daisy chose to forgive Lily. I wish there was a sequel or a one shot of Lily telling James she’s pregnant but this was great! Thank you for this great story!
Katy chapter 15 . 6/19/2021
Sirius is so unnerving tbh. Like I understand that’s your brother and all but as a brother u can’t be blind to his faults just because James liked Lily in the past doesn’t mean she has to throw him a bone and the way he went about it was overwhelming. He should’ve caught onto the fact that Lily didn’t like the over the top things he did, it was overwhelming and just basically too much when really all he had to do was be a friend to her. So no you can’t fault Lily for wanting him now when he’s change. Changed into the guy she knew he could be. I feel bad for daisy but honestly it’s more of Mary’s fault then Lily’s because she told Mary it was done so...yea Mary needs to take responsibility.
Katy chapter 3 . 6/18/2021
IM SCREAMINGGGG omgggg I feel the awkwardnesss ima need Lily to conceal her feelings better plsssss Lily
Jade chapter 5 . 5/7/2021
I have only just found this story and I am really enjoying it. Thank you for writing it. Jily fics are my favourite and this is a really good one! But I have to say that Sirius's attitude in this chapter frustrates me. The notion that Lily was 'wrong' or 'cruel' for starting to fancy James after he had 'gotten over her' is a common thread in Jilly fanfics. It's almost insinuating that she wants what she can't have. But lets face it, a lot of Jame's attempts to win Lily's favour were over the top bordering on inappropriate. Not to mention that he teased her and mocked her. James level of obsession with Lily, described by Sirius in this chapter, is very intense and Lily cannot be blamed for finding this off putting and overwhelming. She was not required to throw James a bone simply because he liked her so much, especially given his behaviour and disregard for her discomfort. No wonder she only started to fancy him once he had calmed down. At the same time, Sirius's character is often overprotective and blind to Jame's faults. So I think his characterisation is spot on. Nevertheless, this attitude always bugs my in Jily fics.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/23/2021
I swear I hate this Lily. I'd actually prefer if James stays away from her ITTL
Guest chapter 20 . 1/16/2021
I think I first read this around 2015 and then once more maybe 2017 and just now I'm going through all my fave fics again and I was SO excited to see an epilogue! The story is so well done and I've always loved it but being able to see a bit beyond their time at Hogwarts is so exciting and I think it's such a good addition to wrap up the story. Plus it was such a nice surprise to come back to this and see new writing! Thank you!
iloveharrysdeadparents chapter 20 . 12/7/2020
I created an account on this site just so that I could review this. This has to be the funniest fic I have ever read in my life. Maybe the funniest book I've ever read in my life in general. I laughed out loud multiple times. I'm appalled. I can only aspire to be on your level of comedic genius someday.
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