|Reviews for Belief's|
| DeansSammy chapter 2 . 6/25/2013
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 2 . 3/26/2013
An inreresting fic, I'll give you that. I like it so far.
There are definitely some improvements to be made, though
1. For starters, there are misspellings.
2. Misplaced and missing punctuation (including in dialogue, so I'd do some research on dialogue rules).
3. The diction feels off. It just doesn't always feel natural, and that's an important element in stories.
4. Maybe it's just me, but I don't really see Cas as a pacer...? Guess the end result is up to you, though/
Just check up on and do some research on all this stuff. It gets easier the more you practice and the more research you do. ;D
| Samstruck chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
It is a great start! Can't wait for more!