Reviews for Rewriting the Past |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yet another time travel story where time traveller Naruto treats Hinata as an afterthought... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im pretty sure he left when naruto was 3 so this is pretty accurate |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the wonderful story. As almost half of a decade had passed I can only cherish such work in my memory Hope your not really dead |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is already written BUT THE NAMIKAZE NAME ISNT AS IMPORTANT AS UZUMAKI. They think Naruto is the last Uzumaki, or the last one they about so why wouldn’t they give him his clan name. It’s just stupid |
![]() ![]() please post the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pls update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like Naruto should remain a single child |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is the next chapter still in the works? |
![]() ![]() Please continue this story |
![]() ![]() Although you are trying to come up with a good story, I don't like this story at all. We have already seen that Naruto has never been a normal realistic person, he will always come up with unique skills and solutions. And contrary to that, you trying to limit the personality development of the character who has a kage level ninja fighting madara head on to just a child is irritating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is amazing by the way |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I've read this story 3 or 4 times now. I noticed something. A secret power of narutos, that we never knew he had. It is the ability to vomit on command |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. The plot is good. In my opinion Danzou shouldn't be in akatsuki. root and akatsuki don't play together very well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon please |