I could list a dozen things to describe this story, but I'll sum it up to, 'positively brilliant!'
It really is disheartening to see that you're not writing here anymore, but just in case you're still checking in from time to time, I've got to tell you that you're going on my favorite authors page. (I'm extremely picky about who goes on it and you definitely make the grade!)
Thank you so much for allowing us to traipse through your impressive imagination. I love it here!

For the record, I have no qualms whatsoever of Alice and Edward's fate. The way I see it they deserved far worse.
I've got to state just how much I admire your character of Nan. Where can I get one of my own, because I think every woman on the planet would benefit hugely by having one just like her!
Oh well,(sigh) nothing in life is perfect.

I can't speak for everyone, but I think your way of circumventing the 'explicit' scenes shows class. It's very well done. Bravo!

Please tell me that this is one of those stories where if a vampire has their hair ripped out , it doesn't grow back. Please...just for me?
I completely agree with you. Carlisle is being a dick! Question is, what is Esme going to do about it?
Tune in next week when Jasper says...
Oh, right! Duh!...I can go on to the next chapter now. (shakes head and sighs. )

Twelve-years-old or not, DANG! That made me smile. The banter between Emmet and Jasper was hilarious and Nans character as a whole is positively brilliant.
I'd write more but I gotta get back to it.

Love, Love, Love! Absolutely loved this story it had me in tears from laughing so hard in some chapters. Thank you for sharing this beautifully designedwritten story ooo

i wish you were still writing because this story is one of my all time favorites

Nan's one of the best OCs I've found in this fandom. Top notch stuff.

I like this story. It's well-written and the romance is decent, but Alice and Edward are so over-the-top malicious that the entire story feels kinda ridiculous. Pretty much every action Alice takes should have Jasper, at the very least, do ANYTHING to get Bella away from her and out of harm's way. Instead, we follow the plot of the books almost exactly, in terms of events and conflicts, but with Alice as the incredibly obvious manipulator behind the scenes. How many murder attempts will it take before Jasper just kills them all?

This was just an absolutely beautiful end to an amazing story. Oh this absolutely skyrockets up to my top Twilight stories. I'm going to reread the HECK out of this. oh I love love LOVE LOVE LOVE this. I have laughed, I have teared up! I have wished there were another 50 chapters. Such fantastic writing. I have absolutely melted over the relationship between Jasper and Bella from the moment they met! And it was so fun reading the moments of Bella and her Nan. This story hit that good spot right in my brain and now it's going to live there rent free. Great, Great work!

Other than the wedding being incomplete, the story was excellent. I went looking for a sequel, but there is none. Thought you were putting one up? Well...according to one of your author's notes, anyway.

Nan's departure was good, But I think you should have let Will be seen. Bella never got to meet her grandfather, so I think that would have been a cool way for her to meet him.

'Why the hell are you dressed as Edward'? Hahahaha! Lol! That was good!

Lol! That was an interesting question at the end. I think it would suck to be him, if he does feel that. He would be the only male EVER to understand our pain.

I like it better when Rose, and Bella are friends. I don't care much for Alice. She's too damn manipulative. I don't like Edward, or Jacob for the same reasons. Edward, and Bella's relationship is toxic.