Reviews for The New Girl
Ally chapter 1 . 3/18/2015
This was a good concept but seemed very rushed and at times completely implausible. I'm a parent. My kid goes missing for tree days and then turns up looking not much like their former self? I'm going to immediately think something is off. I wouldn't just be "anxious" either.

Also, there was almost no development of the supporting characters. What will his friends say? Won't people start to be suspicious that she was gone at the same time that he was?
ChristianMom54 chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
Enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing.
TinaF chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
Wonderful story!
RobLover21 chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
Great twist it was a great story!
BridieM chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Certainly not canon, but most enjoyable. Thanks. :D
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Loved it. Almost a mirror image, but better. Being accepted for who you are can be a very rare occurrence. And it goes to show that if you look beneath the surface to the real person underneath you just might find what you never knew, or thought, you needed. Thanks.
Naomi M chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
it's good, different her being a vampire first instead of him
princessnerra chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
Nice story!
k1942 chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
A little bit strange, and different, but I really liked it!
DataByteDL-FangirlinGranma chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Pretty interesting twist on our fav storyline! Liked seeing it turned around! Love your writing style! Keep at it. Blessings!
parkesy23 chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Nice twist thanks
eddiesgirl4973 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Loved the twist and so well written! Xxxoo
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
FLOVED it! OMG! That truly was really great. I loved the reversal of roles. Loved the super quick recover from being turned. Meaning him being back around people within a week . . . excellent. His parents happiness at his having a girlfriend. There was absolutely no doubt in her mind that he was hers from the moment she met him and he felt the pull as well. Absolutely brilliant. You need another couple chapters of this one . . . greedy me again!
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Oh I liked it!
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Interesting twist, loved it
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